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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:30 pm
Well, those were amuzing. I can't think of anything good. I'd rather just wait to see what really happens in the fourth book.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:38 pm
MY VERSION!!!!
Edward and Bella get married, and the Cullens move to Denali. Edward bites Bella, but makes a mistake, and her changing only lasts a day and a half, because she's lost too much blood. Edward waits anxsiously for her to wake up, but after four days, she still lies motionless and the Cullens have lost all hope. In the meantime, Bella can hear everything they are saying and is desparate to comfort them,but she can't move, and she realizes that her heart is no longer beating. After a long bout of silent, crazed confusion, Bella comes back to her senses during her own funeral back in Forks. At night, after everyone has left the cemetary except for Edward, he lets go of all the hopelessness he had been holding in for the past few days. He sobs uncontrollably as he did in Twilight, and hearing this from six feet under is too much for Bella. She finds the strength to claw her way out of the casket, and just as Edward begins to leave and mutters something about the Volturi, Bella silently finds her way out of the ground. She slinks over to Edward and grabs his arm. Alarmed, he wheels around and sees Bella. They stare at each other blankly for the longest time, and then kiss passionately. It turns out that despite her premature death, the venom in her system still manged to make its way through her body. Soon after, Bella finds out that Jacob finally imprinted, and she spends the rest of the book working on contolling her thirst and managing her gift.... I haven't thought of what it will be though.....
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:55 pm
keep it going! i wanna read more!
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:39 pm
Tnx! I'm working on a full- length version now!
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