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Maiden Curly Crown

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 8:14 pm


Something I pulled together earlier today...have a go at it.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:53 pm


its good
but the clothes should have more ruffles cause it seems like the rest has a lot of detail?
the arms seem a little thin.
the proportion of the head to the body bothers me alittle.
you are good at shading apply some to the body to give ruffles the x in the torso is bothers me like you fizzed out?

Reminds me of daphne's
haven't eaten there in a while

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:41 pm


i would of made her nude, and to hide her nudity just make it like a tree like the rest of her body, and just play a little bit more with the 3dness of it. Like don't treat it as a flat object treat it as something with mass in space, it will help u so much
PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 5:20 pm


This is really good, but I think that the dress should have more detail, because it seems rather simple in comparison to everything else. Excellent job, keep it up!

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japanesejuicebox

PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 9:52 am


Cool concept! Just need a bit of work on figure drawing, and more values in the shading.
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