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Jarem Nightlord Crusnik
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 12:22 pm


Disclaimer: I do not own trinity Blood, however this story is mine.
Rating: Adult
Story Codes: M/F, OFC, VS, Torture
Rating will change and be posted elsewhere.


Part 1 - Intro - The Flight of a Dark Angel


In the haste to find what was left of his dignity, Abel Nightroad ran for his life away from the inquisitors who sought only to arrest him. Why, he thought, he did not know, but rumor had it that his enemy Francesco de Medici had set a bounty on his head that was rumored to be the largest in history.

Abel ducked into an alleyway and fought to regain his breath winter blue eyes showing signs of sheer weariness. He had no idea where he was, save it wasn't Europe. A sharp gaze scanned the area and then he felt no more as a screamer impacted on the back of his head.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 1:10 pm


Chapter 1 - The Fallen One



Abel awoke to to the sound of water hitting stone, and saw a flash of red before having water dashed in his face. A gasp and Abel looked up, silver bangs sticking to his face as water dripped down.

'So the Heretic is awake."

Abel glowered. "No more than you b*****d."

Medici growled and backhanded Abel hard. "Shut up."

Abel grinned meanly."Did I strike a chord?"

The cardinal glared then slammed a knife into Abel's gut and the Crusnik cried out in sheer pain. "Now to figure out how to break you...."

"You can try." Abel muttered the silver blocking his ability to heal. it was a dire weakness he had, silver. Like his weaker methuselah counterparts Abel was weak to silver though it didnt kill him. Medici got the insane idea and slammed blessed bayonets of silver into Abel's body causing the Crusnik to be pinned to the damp wall. Chains then were placed on his wrists and his arms were dragged upwards and bound to the wall. it was in the next six hours that Abel's memory faded to another darker memory.


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A cry ripped through the air as silver landed on a black winged man's back. A heavy collar and chains around his wrists and ankles showed he was a prisoner. A woman held a silver barbed whip and slahsed at the senstive wings, causing the Crusnik to roar in pain.

"Idiot Crusnik, did you really think that I would not break you....now to really break you...bring the girl child."

The Crusnik's eyes widened as a black haired little girl was brought in.

"Do what you will with her."

The little girl screamed as her clothing was ripped off and she was brutally assaulted. The Crusnik felt anger and sheer hatred rage up and fought to break free only to have his wings sliced off. The pain of that shock was enough to drive the creature mad with even more anger.


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It was only after 12 hours did Medici stop, for abel was a mass of blood and silver now barely recognizeable beyond the silver hair and pained blue eyes. 'Fallen One."..he spat and kicked Abel hard.

Abel felt his right lung deflate as broken ribs punctured it. He now strained for breath, blood bubbling up from the quickly filling lung.

Jarem Nightlord Crusnik
Captain


Jarem Nightlord Crusnik
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:24 pm


Chapter 2 - A Hidden Message


Elsewhere an alarm went off and quickly gave a secret organization acces to a file they had been trying to hack for years. It was quickly learned why. A message flashed on the monitor.

"If you are reading this, chances are I am either dying or dead. Find the scientist known as Gast Gangas. He is the only one who can cure me. - Lt Col Nightroad.

The message was quickly passed on and an hour later the influential doctor was looking at old records he knew well. 'So Abel is in danger this time...' he thought to himself and quickly set up a search to find him only to find him marked under Vatican Territory as heretic and traitor. He was set to die in a week.

"I can't let you die...." he murmured and immediately went to the Chief of the Branch he worked for. After a quick talk it was decided to wait for a known fast ship (name will be revealed later) to rescue the priest. That ship would be there in two days.
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Meanwhile Abel groaned in pain as he woke, his wounds healed after Medici had left him there. He still could not move due to the massive amount of silver in his body. A low laugh caused Abel to look up in fear as Medici yanked the bayonets from his body each one causing Abel to yell in pain. They were then methodically placed so the Crusnik could not move or summon the nanites he needed to heal himself.

"Now he will die..." he murmured and pressured his little brother to sign the order, and then another to dissolve the AX making all the agents heretics and traitors.

Abel slipped into another foul dream.

A shivering form was covered by black wings as a woman approached and flicked a whip on those wings causing the Crusnik to flinch. Red eyes looked up defiantly.

She smiled cruelly and deliivered a light blast which blinded him and he yelled as once more he was subject to being drained for vital genetic testing to make sure what was being taken was pure Crusnik.

The woman smiled darkly as the tests ran and showed he was a pure Crusnik....he would father the newest batch of her children then die.

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It was not more than 45 minutes after the second round Medici came back and threw silver nitrate in his eyes causing Abel to writhe in agony as he was blinded. The now insane cardinal then took sheer pleasure at slowly removing the bayonets and crucifying him in the dungeon room using wet leather which would surely cut off circulation if not break his limbs when he struggled when dry.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:08 pm


Chapter 3 - Crusnik's Torment


Abel had slipped into a near coma, the silver burning him so badly he could barely move. His arms ached as he slipped into evil dreams.

*Flashback*


"They are coming!" a runner came in. "The karabites are coming!"

"Prepare for war!" the young silver haired ruler donned the ancient Ruler's armor and his blood scythe formed.

The battle had been vicious and thousands were slaughtered. Jarem was surrounded and felt a familiar darkness. He turned swiftly and paled. "No!"

"Yes. You are the one I want. take him!" She snapped.

jarem was quickly tackled by a dozen drones, and shackled with silver. he roared in pain and grief. "Why did you betray my me...my father! We trusted you!"

She smiled and held a dagger of silver at his throat. "Submit or I will have my drones kill that you call precious..."

He looked over in fear and saw Julene struggling wildly as she was being assaulted. Jarem let out a cry of anger and the scythe vanished. The lightning around him faded and he fell to a low bow. "Spare her i beg you...I surrender!!!"

She laughed. "I don't think I will...kill her. Where is the silver whip..this one must be broken."

Three hours of lashing causing Jarem to be numb, frozen in sheer agony. The white haired woman smiled darkly. "Rack him."

Jarem screamed in agony as he was stretched. Pins of silver were placed in his nipples and he yelled even louder as he was prevented from being aroused. he finally passed out after 6 hours of being on the rack. The was stretched even harder and left there the rest of the night.


*end flashback*

Abel awoke yelling in agony and felt the bones in his arms snap. The psychic reverberations were enough to awaken anyone that was sensitive. The cries of pain reached all the way to the Other Nation, where a vampire known as 'Day Walker' awoke sweating.

Jarem Nightlord Crusnik
Captain


Jarem Nightlord Crusnik
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 3:59 pm


Chapter 4 - The Wake of Pain


It took a while for Don to realize what he had just felt and knew something was terribly wrong. Someone, somewhere was being tortured and it bloody hurt. he sighed and ddressed quickly going to his close friend Sarah.

'Bad dream."


"Don, what was it this time."

'Some silver haired guy getting nailed with blessed bayonets and tied with wet leather."

Sarah raised a brow. "Okay..." she shook her head. Sometimes Don did have the wierdest dreams. At least it wasn't the birthday surprise last year." (KUDOES TO SARAH FOR THE ED PIC)

"Seriously, the psychic reverberutionsthis guy was giving off was enough to cause me pain."

'Damn."

A lizardman came in and looked at Don.'Silver hair, blue eyes, very skinny, yet built?"

"Yes."

"It's Abel. His file just unlocked with this message."

"If you are reading this, chances are I am either dying or dead. Find the scientist known as Gast Gangas. He is the only one who can cure me. - Lt Col Nightroad.

"His file places him in rome and I checked thier database. He is a priest there."

Looks like we got a mission." Sarah replied. "I'll get Dek and Reno."

"I'm coming too." Gast replied calmly.

"So am I. for your sake Doc."

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Abel awoke and saw a figure in red and black and whimpered trying to shy away.

"'Easy, Nightroad...it's just me and Paula... Here you need this." he got Abel to drink some water before he had to slip off.

And the Torture began again.
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