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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 9:22 pm

who want's to pop my rapping cherry?

just wrote this s**t up right now... lol, i really dont know if i can do anything better but ******** it here it go's
(i thought it up in about 10 to 15 min. listenin to this http://youtube.com/watch?v=gLGaYRB87mI&feature=related)

ive heard better s**t commin from a ***** on the block
spittin verbal diariah with writters block

id write something sick if you were worth the spit
but ******** reachin in my mind yall just aint worth it

i got some lyrical sick s**t
some s**t sicka then that lynch sickness
i hear a rhyme and it appears in my mind in a quickness

my rap talent just unwrapped like it was wrapped up on christmas
i spit at a couple of peeps and it sent em swimmin with fishes

now get this

yall gonna love it, and if ya dont than yall can go shove it

my first rap battle, im brand new to the field
and already i got rappers lip's shut, glued and sealed

im fresh out the rapper factory
but i can already see
after readin my verse
yall gonna love me

Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 10:10 pm

it's ok for someone who doesn't have a target. when you drop a battle first without an opponent to target, there isn't much for you to say.

try making an open call out, or accept someone else's call out. maybe someone will go first so you'll have something to work with. just remember the general rules:

-no biting: using someone else's rhymes
-no feeding: no taking what your opponent said before you, then trying to flip it.
-no recycling: no using old s**t from previous battles.
-no dickriding: no biased voting. (for voters only, obviously)

i think that's all as far as general rules.

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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 4:08 pm

Phoenix Fist

it's ok for someone who doesn't have a target. when you drop a battle first without an opponent to target, there isn't much for you to say.

try making an open call out, or accept someone else's call out. maybe someone will go first so you'll have something to work with. just remember the general rules:

-no biting: using someone else's rhymes
-no feeding: no taking what your opponent said before you, then trying to flip it.
-no recycling: no using old s**t from previous battles.
-no dickriding: no biased voting. (for voters only, obviously)

i think that's all as far as general rules.

it was basically pointed to anyone who wanted to take the bait and battle... and so far, ive followed the rules.

Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 6:08 pm

lil puppet x3

Phoenix Fist

it's ok for someone who doesn't have a target. when you drop a battle first without an opponent to target, there isn't much for you to say.

try making an open call out, or accept someone else's call out. maybe someone will go first so you'll have something to work with. just remember the general rules:

-no biting: using someone else's rhymes
-no feeding: no taking what your opponent said before you, then trying to flip it.
-no recycling: no using old s**t from previous battles.
-no dickriding: no biased voting. (for voters only, obviously)

i think that's all as far as general rules.

it was basically pointed to anyone who wanted to take the bait and battle... and so far, ive followed the rules.

i know. i'm just saying that it's better to do an open call out, then post once you're opponent has been determined. the way you did it, you're automatically at a huge disadvantage.

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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:22 pm

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lil puppet x3

Phoenix Fist

it's ok for someone who doesn't have a target. when you drop a battle first without an opponent to target, there isn't much for you to say.

try making an open call out, or accept someone else's call out. maybe someone will go first so you'll have something to work with. just remember the general rules:

-no biting: using someone else's rhymes
-no feeding: no taking what your opponent said before you, then trying to flip it.
-no recycling: no using old s**t from previous battles.
-no dickriding: no biased voting. (for voters only, obviously)

i think that's all as far as general rules.

it was basically pointed to anyone who wanted to take the bait and battle... and so far, ive followed the rules.

i know. i'm just saying that it's better to do an open call out, then post once you're opponent has been determined. the way you did it, you're automatically at a huge disadvantage.

lol
yeah, but waddeverz
i thought of something, got excited cuz i thought it wasnt bad and just wanted to post that s**t
haha, ya know? but what ever, i can and will do better

Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:48 pm

see i really would battle him but seein as aint no one really like me here i aint feel like being screwed

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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:04 pm

Haze_D-Block

see i really would battle him but seein as aint no one really like me here i aint feel like being screwed

i doubt someone would vote against you because they don't like you. the butt-bandits that used to pull that sort of s**t don't even post here anymore.

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