i been doin some s**t (lots of shitty pictures)

[Queen Pirate Bunny]

On the whole your anatomy is pretty good, but here and there you have things that make me go "huh?", like the arm/hand on the last piece that is one the left-most side of the page. His other hand is a little jacked too.

The person on the second to last piece isn't exactly "sitting" on the bed. There is something slightly off there.

The ribcage of the male figure in the first piece is too prominent.. but that might just be because you are still working it out and the underdrawing makes it look that way.

Besides that, your character sketches are wonderful. They have such dynamism to them. They are very animated. You also have a wonderful sense of color and value.

Is the last piece finished or a WiP still? I'd love to see some of your work without any black lines in it. I think it would look really nice.

Also, check out James Jean if you haven't already.

 

[Queen Pirate Bunny]

The Iconoclast

I consider the last one complete, though initial plans involved a lot more clean-up and some cracks in the pavement, gravel, that kind of s**t.

I'm not really comfortable with the first picture at all, and I've been thinking about redoing it entirely. It's stiff and unappealing - doesn't convey the sort of possesive intimacy I was after at all.

Well definitely look at James Jean.
And I agree on the first one... It actually looks like a take on model posing, which is what I thought it was supposed to be.

They need more interaction if it is supposed to be about possessive intimacy.

 

[Queen Pirate Bunny]

The Iconoclast

How do you feel about Wesley Burt?

I don't think I've seen his stuff before. I just googled it and it reminds me of Shawn Barber's work.