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Kinnan

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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:25 pm

This is my second time drawing one of these (furries)...it's my second time trying to do a full picture too. If you have any suggestions on what to add, that'd be great.

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I was trying to do a bit of a high angle with her looking up.
The floor boards, her legs, feet, and the gift boxes bother me (can't say why though). :/

Anyways, critique encouraged (advanced or not). =]

P.S. She's a squirrel~

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 1:42 pm

-: I made her looking downward, something you don't need to do. Same thing goes for the hair, I don't why I did that.

For the feet, you might want to do rectangles for a more 3D look or just don't complete the foot. What I mean by that erase the line were the leg and foot connect.

You were doing good with the acrons but the one closer to the body, you brought it in too soon. :-

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Kinnan

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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 11:33 am

Thank you very much. =]

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