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 Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:43 pm
And if felt good. It's been a while. :/ 
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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 11:41 am
Very cool, love the hairs and the clothies.
Only thing I don't like so good are her hand(s). and it looks like maybe her torso should be more forward facing.
Overall awesome: I aspire to have lines that clean looking.
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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 11:06 am
her bellybutton seems real low idk
I think its cause you drew her sternum ending way lower than her boobs which they should be about level (or they are on me at least)
i think you would benefit from bringing her waist up a little higher along with her bellybutton
but them hips are getting me all hot and bothered.
the fleshpinching is masterful
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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 7:08 pm
Very awesome!
I love how clean the line work is.
One thing i might say is that gesture of the raised arm is a bit lost in the detail of the hair. For some reason, ff you had left a bit of space between the arm and the head, where we could see a bif od the hair coming through the crook of her elbow, the pose would be clearer.
Also, her hand is a bit big. Anatomically, hands are big enough to cover the face, but not crush the head XD
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 7:43 pm
Her neck's kinda long, but I mean otherwise, that's pretty hot.
Really.
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 3:55 pm
Very sexy, I love the pinched skin. And what I noticed that in that facial expression she would be somewhat looking down? The nose looks as though it would appear she's looking up. I think it's the eyes giving that looking down illusion on how they are slanted. I love her 'seductress' pose and expression, very hot.
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Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 11:51 am
Hands seem a little large, and the neck looks a bit funky, but otherwise, hawt.
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 8:27 pm
Very nice... your line weight rocks. However I must agree, the betty button is a bit low, the hands a bit too large, and for how believable the hair is as far as form goes... i would like to see better rendering of the fabric. I mean, its technically rendered very well, it just does not reflect the form of the breast. Think of it this way- for all we know it could be plastic.... give the fabric some weight and think about how it would lay upon the breast. give it some gravity.
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Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:37 pm
Her hand looks like a spider, I love it
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 2:56 am
All these people got here first with crit so all that is left to say is PURRRDY
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