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~A taste of Shaggy~Updated Dec.14

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Samurai_Brad
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:52 am


This was created for a girl..Dont run away yet..i dated for 8 years.

"So meany ways"

Will i live till tommoro, Will i live past today.
The future is unkown but i still want to say
... I Love you ... So many way'z.

Your the stars in my eyes that makes the darkness go away.
Your the thoughts in my mind that gets me throw Depressed days.
Your the love in my heart that makes me want to depart from those crazy ways.
Your the freak in my soul that wakes me lovingly without control.

If i live till tommoro and i stay past today.
The future will still be unkown, but nomatter what i still need to say
... I Love you ... So many way'z.

'Apon the deaf ears of Nycci'
Copyright 2001 Shaggy
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*update*

(Kinda depressing one...
I wrote this when i was working at walmart one day, Idk why..)

"Fear"
I feel like im drowning, I want 2 move but the water holds me, i want to Scream but it chokes me, i want to die but it wont let me, I want to take my life but it restrains me.
What do i do, Wait to die? Or should i try?
All i know for shure is u are my sun and sky, I want to feel your warmth and hear your breeze but im to far down, deep, dark and drowning...

Shaggy 2002'

(but who dont feel that way working at walmart)
PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 7:23 pm


I love the metaphors.
Prity.

carry on wayward daughter
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lolo the daydreamer

PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 10:06 pm


that was great...
PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 9:21 am


its beautiful.. wink

SupertrampBru
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Samurai_Brad
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 2:02 pm


Updated*
PostPosted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 3:04 pm


I like the second one. It's cool.

WolfTeeth-x
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Samurai_Brad
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:11 pm


NickelbackNerd
I like the second one. It's cool.


Thank u.. biggrin
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