-=Sonnet 1 (escaping)=-

Silver lines thus do fade
while coppered bars turn to jade
shadows soar on memories past
i beg the forsaken souls to last
the bars do bend and in time break
and suffer slow 'till ends do make
escaping fleeing,a soul on fire
and i spy you my dearest liar
an anchor in my sands of sin
i take a breath and draw you in
a memory on a lake of fire
i sit with you my heartfelt liar
and now together we will last
unlike before in ages past


eNd

© -=SH4D3NH4ND=-, 2005-01-09

Comments: I know this is a bad form for a sonnet but I didn't know when I posted it and I'm not changing it right now. Same follows for sonnets 2-4. Original comment:" ok well ... god im nervous i shouldnt have had so much coffee i hope that sonnets are aloud heres my first one SOME ONE PLEASE SEND ME A COMMENT i need to know what you think.... oh yea btw written in my pathetic attempt at a modified Shakespeare style hope you enjoy...."