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It's three days before christmas, 12 year old Haruno Sakura is running throught the snowy streets of the hidden leaf village. Behind her is Rock Lee and Usamaki Naruto. The two boys are chasing after her with missletoes on there heads. "SAKURA CHAN SAKURA CHAN" they both yelled.

Sakura looked back and saw that they were both gaining. She thought to herself I Hate Christmas these two never leave me alone. She wasn't paying any attenting when she crashed into her black haired, onyx eyed team mate. Her crashing into him made him fall backwards. At the same time she was falling forward. She fell on top of Sasuke her face was and inch away from his. Sasuke and Sakura blushed at the same time. (OMG SASUKE KUN HAS FEELINGS)

"Sakura can you get off of me" he told her, "Your heavy." Sakura wasn't really heavy. He just didn't want her to know that he liked her.

"Sorry Sasuke kun," she blushed again and got off of him.

Sasuke sits up and sees Naruto and Lee running this way. Then he looked at Sakura seeing her face was compleatly white.

"Sakura-chan Sakura-chan Sakura-chan" the two boys yelled. Sasuke saw the missletoes on there heads. No wonder why she is scard these to knuckleheads are trying to make Sakura kiss them Sasuke thought. Naruto and Lee cought up now. Naruto walked up to Sakura and said "Hey Sakura-chan your under the missletoe. You know the rules you have to kiss me."

Sakura stood up" Yes I know," She leaned in to Narutos face.

Sasuke thought is she reall going to do that. Naruto just stood the. His face all pink. When Sakura got and inch away she punched Naruto in the face making him fly back into a wall which made the wall crack. Sasuke Just stared.When andwhere the Hell fif she kearn that. After Lee saw that her ran away yelling, "Sakura chan. I'm so sorry>Forgive me."

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(WHAT DO YOU THINK)

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I think you could do without the brackets saying (OMG SASUKE HAS FEELINGS) and what not.

Maybe you could check over your grammar and spelling again? And it's quite difficult to read.

And your portrayal of Sasuke is kind of out of character. He wouldn't admit even to himself that he liked her.

And Lee and Naruto... they wouldn't do that XD Maybe Naruto would try to get a kiss, but he wouldn't attempt to force her like that. And Lee's too much of a gentleman to do that.

Maybe you should revise keeping in character as well?

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