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~Precious Nightmares~

PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 8:43 pm


I'm leaving once I've posted this, so I can post it in the other Guilds I'm in. So, yeah. Diss it all you like. Or profess your love for it. *Shrug* I won't be here, so you won't bother me.


She walks to school with the lunch she packed
Nobody knows what she's holdin' back
Wearin' the same dress she wore yesterday
She hides the bruises with linen and lace

The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask
Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Sometimes she wishes she was never born

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel

Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear, but they turn out the lights
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it'll be too late

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel


A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an upturned face
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel

PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 1:50 pm


kinda silly to post a work like that without staying for criticism...

themagikat


Stabbing Westward

PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 2:11 pm


I heard that on the radio last year. I have no criticisms.

I don't see the point in you posting it and leaving, but...okay.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 5:10 pm


Sometimes others describe our emotions best but we only wish someone, anyone to hear. Maybe that's the intention...

ceilisidhe


themagikat

PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 8:49 pm


perhaps. it was a bit random though
PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 4:30 pm


Random can be good.

I thought the song/poem was good. If you want criticism, I feel like I've heard news like this before. If that's even an insult.

Drama Freak


GlamourLolita

PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 2:26 am


Ah...my dears that's a country song called Concrete Angel by Martina McBride.
I guess she thought it was odd for her to be posting a country song on here and wanted you to see it for the lyrics.
I know this because I sang it with a friend in my fourth grade talent show xd
PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 10:24 am


"....I have no idea why I was invited here, who's the creator of this guild? I don't think I know the person..."

Chelsea~Van~Hellsing


deadrose_gothik

PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 10:34 am


It was very good. I have never heard of it before, but I liked it. Hell... I loved it.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 5:08 pm


I know that song but why would she post and then leave?... crazy

nerdlover08


The Little Cat Demon

PostPosted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 9:56 am


[bump
PostPosted: Tue May 02, 2006 9:05 am


so prety, i like it

Bad_anakin_girl


DehShadow-ness

PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 8:36 am


LOVE IT!!!!! its good! its really good
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