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WnX Hokaru
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 4:34 am


Ok, bear with me on this, coz this is actually supposed to be a comic/manga im doing, so it probably wont be as good without the pictures to go with it ><

Feu woke up with a burning sensation in his arms and chest. The sleeping bag he was half in and out of was warm, but too warm now that he could feel heat flowing through his body. As he stood up he found his stiff joints were sore and irritating. Halfway through putting his sleeping bag back in its case he stopped and leaned against the tree he was in front of.
The one thing that was going through his mind at the moment was the dream he had just had, a dream of a recent past. He cast his mind back accidentally and images of his mistake kept flowing into his head, like drops of paint falling into a glass of water, changing it and causing it to ripple. As it came to the part where he fell and missed his chance to save his friend, he clenched his fist and shut his eyes tightly.
For the moment however, the thoughts passed and he finished putting his things away into the small bag he had with him. As he made his way through the bright woods in silence he could hear all the sounds and activities of the forest's nature: the chirping birds, the rustling animals out of sight, and the various monsters and creatures that were going about their daily bussiness. The sound that he took most interest in was the sound of running water that seemed to be growing and growing.
As he came to a clearing of the trees, he saw a small stream just a few feet away now. He pulled out his nearly empty water bottle and poured the last of it into the stream before plunging his bottle in and filling it with the gleaming clear water. He knew it was fresh water becuase the nearest sea was quite a bit way, not close enough to touch this stream. He put his water bottle down beside him and then cupped his hands and emersed them with water, slpashing it over his face. He felt more awake now and refreshed, the cold water running down his face and trickling along his neck. He managed to keep the water away from his bright red hair despite its length, but as soon as he looked up again his hair tried to take its usual place over his deep light blue eyes. He smiled to himself now that he was in a better mood and pushed his hair away so he could see properly again.
He wasn't sure where his feet would take im next but he was sure he would find something interesting and hopefully usefull, for his quest was surely going to be a long one, that is, if he ever found out how to start it or if he could ever finish it. But it certainly wouldnt be something to be short lived. But for now all he could do was make his way forward.


Ok, this isnt nearly finished at all, but ill update it again and again when i can. But untill then please feel free to comment or pont out spelling mistakes and such XD
PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 3:57 pm


It sounds interesting so far. I'd love to see it as a comic!

Requiem of Antiquity


WnX Hokaru
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 9:29 am


^^ thankies mrgreen and kool new outfit wacko!
PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 2:25 am


As a story this is great but im just thinking of how are you gona do this with the artwork.Not like you can explain every single litle detail n there.Anyways if it works its gona be awesome.If not its gona suck a**.So basicaly good luck and hope you succed.

Quitarias


WnX Hokaru
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 11:32 am


Lol, thats a fair thing to say. But what isnt said in the pictures ive just explained more in the writing. If i cant do it in the picture then i do it in writing. I just love describing thigs so i extended things ^^
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