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Help with hands - holding a bowl [UPDATED]

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Tasa-chan

PostPosted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:02 pm


I'm working on a gift for a friend - I'm just starting out, and I already know I'm gonna have problems with the hands (always do!)
can someone maybe redline a sketch for me to help me out?

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I'm looking for help more so for the hand under the bowl - the spoon one i can do if I try real hard (and undo lots!) but the bowl... needs crazy perspective stuff that I find kinda hard

I'll post better images as I get more work done. =) Oh, and its illustrator, so I can edit anything without any trouble


thank you!

(she's supposed to be baking lol)

feel free to point out other problems within the drawing.... i know the bottom of the image is all messed up, I'm cropping that out later. and the gaia picture of her is in the corner for reference
PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 4:45 pm


Wow such clean art =D

I wish I could do that >_<

I'm sorry I'm not good at hands nor perspective.

think the hand with the spoon should be tilted a bit more..because I don't think the hand aligns with the straight sleeve

Mushypork-Sanity


Tasa-chan

PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 7:56 am


I see what you mean about the hand ^_^ thanks! I didn't notice that before.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 5:34 pm


Orz, this is the best I can do sad

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I think it looks really great so far though! It's adorable, and it reminds me of something from Cooking mama ^^; It's soo cute!

Xiaa


Noelani-chan

PostPosted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 5:36 pm


I apologize if I massacred your drawing with my red line, unfortunately, I'm a drawing noob too.
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First off, I attempted to fix the hand(yes, i'm aware it's a bit skinny) You might want to go get a wooden spoon and take a reference picture, so you can get it exactly right.

I altered her boob line slightly, i don't know, the pointiness bothered me a bit.

I also broadened the shoulders a little bit.

I brought the ear down, so it will align with my imaginary eyes and nose.

I also made the neck wider, so it could support the weight of her head.

Hope that helps a little bit! heart
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