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petitefromage Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 8:06 pm
OOXenaOWarriorOPrincessOO Thanks! I'm sure you're better than you're letting on. Why don't you share on with us? erm, no way. but my friend Brennan is absolutely brilliant, I'll have him post one.
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 7:19 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:22 pm
great things to read
poems aren't my thing tho ._.
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 12:08 pm
I like it though poems are not my forte sweatdrop
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petitefromage Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 3:40 pm
StarQueenCeleste I like it though poems are not my forte sweatdrop same here, I don't think that I could write a long poem, but I can do haikus! is that better?
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Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 10:08 pm
wow, you guys are really good! here's one of mine, poems aren't my best but i am good with stories Life is but an evil mystery that wraps us in it's many fold.
we try to escape but to no avail, we have no one to hold.
Pray, cry, laugh, yell; nothing will safe you from this hell.
Assassin's code, an animal's prey; all will perish with each day.
Devil, demons, evil souls; all call out from their holes.
God, angels, and the Christ; may they save you from all fright. let me know what you think please
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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 9:23 am
Nice guys, I like your stuff. I wouldn't call mine 'dark' but here we go, this is me trying to get more active in the rest of the guild not just the rps. It's a little old I haven't wrote anything new since the end of my junior year so yeah..... Do you remember?
Do you remember that night?
So long ago?
When we didn’t have a care
In the world?
Do you remember the sky?
The dark storm clouds?
Billowing overhead as
Lightning struck the ground?
It was just the two of us,
All alone in the world,
Our hands clasped together,
As the heavens poured down.
Do you remember that night?
That fate filled kiss?
That long sleepless dark?
Two people never meant to be.
Two people never meant to live.
Two people proclaiming their love
To the storm filled sky.
I remember that night.
So long ago.
When all we cared about
Was just each other.
Do you remember that night?
When love was all that mattered?
Do you remember?
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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 8:15 pm
They're really good, way better than i could ever do. great job
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:13 pm
that's a really cool poem
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:55 pm
Thanks, I really liked yours.
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Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:52 pm
thanks! my friends all said i must've been really ticked when I wrote it but I was just watching the people around me. life itsself is a peom of darkness
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Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:55 pm
ok, here on of my sis's poems. all credit goes to Kage no Tsuki-sama. I cry to the blood red moon,
Unbelieving I've reached the end do soon.
Should I run still,
And go against the Creator's will?
Will I lose the afterlife,
And be doomed to a world of eternal strife?
As I watch the moon bleed,
I can not help but feel the need,
To see my brother one last time;
With this, my final rhyme.
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:22 pm
hey hey! the poems here are great! could i participate? For the love of god, Tell me why, why, why must I suffer for you???!!! My heart longs for you, But you close the door of your heart in my face, Forcing me to face the world in shame, I swear to god that I shall never rest, Until I see you suffer the same fate, You shall die by the shame that will soon surround you, And I shall soon be free of mine! twisted twisted twisted twisted
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:40 am
well, i don't really like writing poems in ryme, just 'cause you have to go though all that trouble....i do ryme off the top of my head sometimes, usually i just write poems dont ryme.
I walked down a road labled 'life' in spite of curiousty,
to find the wonders that might await me,
i came to a fork in the road, there was a pole in the middle, stating:
this way is the road less taken
i ponder in surprise, as i stare with dispare, will i take the road most taken or will i take the one, less taken.
i shrug and go in the direction unknown, this was the road i took, the road less taken.
if you come up to the sign, in the future, go with the one your heart tells you not your head, if you walk down the road less taken you might find me, instead.
sorry 'bout the poem line it goes all over sometime i ryme sometimes i don't. it would be better if i went over it a few times, but i just thought of it off the top of my head XD ( inspiration: the road not taken by Robert Frost
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