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 Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 12:04 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 6:57 pm
umm its not the best but it is still very good!
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 1:39 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 11:19 am
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i think it is very nice for a very first chibi. however, the eyes are not in the same line [they go up and face goes down @-@;] but still the chibi is cute ^-^
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 2:11 am
I find it really difficult of comment and rate chibis since the style itself is, well, super deformed ^^;; so I'll give it a hesitant 3/10
The shoulders should slope downwards. Atm he's looking rather stiff and uncomfortable. If he's tightly strung up maybe angry slanted eyes to convey the attitude better and a shorter neck?
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Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 6:37 pm
I think making the top of the head rounder would do it a world of good
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Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2007 1:35 pm
the suggestions you've gotten so far are good ones, though. that angle on his cheek (viewer's left) is a bit too sharp. make the head a bit more round, and maybe add some more curve to the chin (though not too much)?
finally, the eyes are bit high, too - they seem to be right in his forehead. ):
but i think for a first try at a chibi it's pretty good.
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