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 Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 7:25 pm
I've been rolling around with this for a while and I want to finalize it so I can continue to do the art. I have about 3 pages done as of now, and since I'm still not totally happy with areas it would be nice for other opinions.
Anyway, thanks in advance, the script is in my journal, the latest entry and I'm sorry for the bad formatting. It was better in my word document but it didn't transfer well to gaia.
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Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 8:09 pm
Perhaps you should mention its a friends only journal?
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Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 7:57 pm
Oh i'm sorry I didn't realize. I've change it. Sorry! domokun
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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 6:14 pm
ahh, I shall try to find time to read your script, but as I am slightly busy, I promise to read it soon and give you feedback!
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petitefromage Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 12:51 am
where be the script I am to critique
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 5:09 pm
Riku Finare- where be the script I am to critique It's in Flir's journal.....Flir, do you think that you can included the link please?
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petitefromage Vice Captain
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