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Reply Songs, poems, rants.... all is welcome. Come bare your soul!
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Shirashima
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 7:46 pm


I don't know what to do to make you understand.
I don't know why the tears still flow.
You don't understand how much you mean to me.
I don't understand at all.

I don't know why I care for you.
I don't know if its real.
I don't know what to say or do.
I don't know how to feel.
I don't know who would understand.
I don't know.
Do you?

The pain I feel leaves
the moment YOU walk into view.
I'm happy and I know you are too.
So please just take a moment
and try to understand.
I don't understand at all.

I don't know why I care for you.
I don't know if its real.
I don't know what to say or do.
I don't know how to feel.
I don't know who would understand.
I don't know.
Do you?

The things you drink away
are more than just thoughts.
The pain inside me hates that part of you.
I don't know how to deal.
I'm not that strong.
I care for you.
Don't you understand
that I don't understand at all?

Why do you do these things to you?
Can't you see you're killing who you are?
What should I do?
I can't control you, won't control you.
You don't want me to.
I can't change you, won't change you.
You don't want me to.
I can't tell you what to do, won't tell you what to do.
You don't want me to.

Don't you see the things I see when I look at you?
Don't you see that I truely care?
Don't you see these patterns all around us?
Don't you see this girl needs you too?
You don't understand what I've understood all along.

No matter what I say or do
You'll always be just you.
No matter that you want to change.
Change is just too hard.
I'm here for you if you need me,
or even if you don't,
but don't ask me to change for you
if you won't.

I don't know why I care for you.
I don't know if its real.
I don't know what to say or do.
I don't know how to feel.

I don't know why you'd care for me.
I don't know how to prove
What you see is what you get.
I've nothing left to lose.
I don't know what you've done to me,
but for once I understand.
You mean so much to me,
even though you try to change me.
I care.
I don't know why but
I care.
Do you know if
you care?

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 3:12 pm


Awesome! ^_^

At first I just read it really quickly, like a poem, and it felt really stiff, but when I imagined music behind it it suddenly became really flexible and flowing.

I love the sort of repetitive effect to it.

Torokukat
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Songs, poems, rants.... all is welcome. Come bare your soul!

 
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