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 Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 8:04 pm
prologue:
This story was inspired by Kingdom Hearts. I use the theme as where the heros travel around into different worlds. But instead of Disney worlds "i cant draw disney well enough to do soo ahhaa~" instead they would be going into different anime worlds. well i would go into more detail about it. but i rather show you in manga style wooo! so enjoy an commet back if you can feed back can help me do better on later chapter/Mixes~ whee
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 8:11 pm
Editing swy mad be BACK SOON!
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 10:17 pm
Hey Dori this is Jimmy,
Just thought I'd tell you I signed up, and what not. Good luck with your manga!
SWOOSH!
Post-Edit: I read the manga, and here's my reply:
SHINKUU HADOUKEN!
-Ryu pose-
:3
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 8:36 am
here are some critiques, you should really tell the story a little slower, and give the audience questions. You should try to bring up questions and problems that the audience can get excited about, and will want to know. Also tell the story a little slower, cause it seems like ur rushing things, and sometimes i get lost in the comic. Like i don't know whats going on. Try setting the place, and setting the characters, otherwise people will get lost.
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:37 am
Yea i see what your talking about ill work on it on the other chap. Thnx alot~ 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 1:24 pm
DooRiSkecth Yea i see what your talking about ill work on it on the other chap. Thnx alot~ 3nodding No problem, just keep at it, i really admire what ur doing considering i love to read comics.
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 5:05 am
hi. i luv manga i'll b bak 2 read the nxt chp wen ur done
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:32 pm
i started something similar recently. but never really finished it. i lost interest in it very soon, same for me with most other comics. But i'm looking forward to seeing it. biggrin
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petitefromage Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:27 am
BeautyAndTheDorkXXX i started something similar recently. but never really finished it. i lost interest in it very soon, same for me with most other comics. But i'm looking forward to seeing it. biggrin yes, I lose interest in things quickly as well. but I look forward too to seeing your work.
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