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 Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 3:28 pm
She wasnt the best sis in the world and she caused me much pain, thats when i wrote her this poem but she was already gone... suicide.
f** the life aint worth living for ever heard of a sis who doesnt know her bro
I gave her the love that no one knows and my sorrowful soul for her to glow
i ripped my skin my flesh and bone, spilled the blood i called my own
thought ur a goddess but then i knew the throne of the devil belongs to you
too late now the scars wont go, from the sand and to the sand you go
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 5:57 pm
try adding more lines to it, it seems a little short you know?
unless that's how you like it then keep it that way.
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 6:12 pm
Soviet Mudkipz try adding more lines to it, it seems a little short you know? unless that's how you like it then keep it that way. true it is short i actually wrote it years ago on a piece of paper and i lost it, after these years those were the only lines i could remember.
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 6:37 pm
how much of the paper did it take up..do you remember?
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 1:01 am
i think when i first wrote it ummm it was about 20-25 lines but why do u ask ?
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:26 am
i was just wondering, cause you have a lot of remembering to do
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:39 pm
hehe i hope u mean something good with that smile i really am trying to, it was the first poem i ever wrote and i really kept that lil piece of paper in my wallet and carried it everywhere, but once time i took it out to read it again and then left it in my pocket, following day i saw my pants folded in my closet... i open my pocket and found the paper totally ruined there was nothing left, that was the only depressing poem too, other poems i wrote were love poems to my ex -.- and i deleted them myself its nothing she deserved or worth remembering. =]
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 8:32 pm
so your momma or something got to them
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 7:28 am
Soviet Mudkipz so your momma or something got to them not really family got 2 maids who do all the house work cause "mom" cant be assed to do anything. also mom cant read english.
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