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Shirashima
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:22 pm


You say you don't care about me,
that I never mattered.
You say you don't think about me,
that we were just a game.
You say you don't want to know
what's going on around you.
You say you don't care.
You can't help but stare.

When I look at you I see someone there
who never knew what to do
who couldn't take the chance to care at all.
When I look at you I see a chance to grow
for you and only you.

Let me be the one
to show you this is real.
Let the world fade away.
The past is in the past.
Glances back will hurt you.
Don't drink the past away.
Its gone.

When I look at you I see someone there inside
who isn't sure of all that's going on.
When I look at you I notice
so much more than what you see,
what you think,
what you've done.
Change for you
and only you.

I can't let the pain I feel show.
This is your choice, not mine.
Don't ask, and I won't tell.
You should know for yourself.
I can't change you.

I won't change you.

When I look at you I see someone who's confused
who sees the past as never over
who sees the world as a battlefield.
When I look at you I'm scared because I see
a person deep inside of me
wants to set you free.
I know I have to let go
for you and only you.  
PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 2:31 pm


Awesome! ^_^

I love how it has such an underlying sadness to it.

Torokukat
Crew


m i n i m i k k i

PostPosted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 4:38 pm


I love it!!! I really need to get back to writing poetry... I havent in a while. it's kinda hard to get some good inspiration and modivation lateley. idk why. the only thing that I have written recently is:

For those who love, for those who mourn
For those who cry, for those who learn
This one thing I want you to know
That I'll always be with you
Wherever you go.

sweatdrop I wish i could find a better word to use there than "learn". That poem isnt very good. I'm not that great, but i can at least write those short poems, sometimes i can write some long ones, but i have to have like a wave of strong emotion crashing down on me to do so... But another one i wrote was:

I know you cannot hear me,
I know you don't understand,
But the love for you is in my heart
And forever it will stand.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 8:19 am


Thanks. Yes you should because your little blurbs are fairly good.


My poems tend to not have a very consistent rhyme scheme, but that's because I like free verse a lot better.

Mostly I write songs.... but what is a song but poetry with music? lol that sounded lame even to me.

Shirashima
Vice Captain

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Songs, poems, rants.... all is welcome. Come bare your soul!

 
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