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 Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 10:02 am
First off let me say that I think it's totally awesome that you've got soooo many ideas for essences and souls since it means you aren't tied down to just one thing. Gives room for growth and greater possibility for you getting a Raevan.
Okay, essences. Visual Invisibility is dead on as being an essence and no work will need to be done to it anymore. In fact, I thoroughly enjoy the idea of a Raevan having that ability, should prove to be fun. Although others may see it as a bit morbid in a sense, I think your Heart of Stone has great potential as well. The ability for whatever Raevan is created from this would be very interesting to decide and play.
Souls. I couldn't help, but notice your first one is a Succubi. If you remember, Kyou's Lazarus has the soul of an Incubus. I'm not saying you shouldn't try for this one, I'm just saying you need to tread carefully even if it is the female counterpart. The Geisha might not work as they would be an actual person. That is unless you actually plan on taking the soul of said person and have no objections, then by all means proceed. Though, I absolutely adore the choose of a cecaelia! Very different and would prove to be an interesting addition to the groups dynamics.
You have tons of great ideas, some good and some not so, but with so much variety you'll have the one soul and essence you want in no time. I'm really looking forward to seeing your concept come into fruition. Good luck!
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 10:49 am
Thanks so much! I've kept my options open because I figure if I can bounce them off other members that it will be easier for me to decide what will be the most creative mix of my ideas. That and I'm a little wishy-washy, so being able to see people's reactions to my ideas is good, too.
And I was wary about keeping the Succubi up there in the first place because Lazarus has the soul of an Incubus, but I figured I shouldn't completely knock the idea just yet. As for the Geisha, it's another one I'm iffy on. While I don't mind having to take an actual human soul, it is a little morbid.
The Cecaelia is definitely my favorite soul idea at the moment. It is unique (or so I like to think) and it would definitely have a handful (or tentacleful) of personality, at least. I think it would be a very nice addition to the group.
And thanks again for the critique!
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:12 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 2:45 pm
Okay, just a couple things I notice.
1. Your doctoring/editing of the Essence vials and jars for your post of Essence choices. Remove them all. Now. You're breaking a huge rule, as well as the first rule, of the shop --Main Shop Rules [.01] DO NOT steal or edit any of the artworks created by Kyou. Kyou spent alot of time producing every single artwork in the shop, even the graphic banners too. Stealing art is highly offensive and you will be reported to the site admins and get yourself banned.
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 5:57 pm
Thankies Rav!
Didn't know that was in the rules. I just added to the images
I had in this thread last year, and well... nobody pointed that
out before and I don't remember having seen that in the rules.
But dually noted now, and thanks again!
Also, that's cool. Those, as well, were here before and have not
been updated in over 350 days, so I figured they were still good
to go. I'll be sure to take them off the list and work around them.
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