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 Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 6:43 pm
. . . . . "great job" ingnorant AND super sensitive. . that sounds so good when you jot it down in a poem to someone.
To the one that doesn't understand my thoughts.
"It's a talent!" you would say,
to be thrown this and that way.
To be kicked to the dust,
And bite your teeth on rust.
But HEY! Don't worry,
It's just one day.
Tomorrow will be better,
Yes, it won't last forever.
If they say your wrong
don't bring up that old song
don't stand and fight
just let them tell you off and shrug.
But I'm not like you.
I battle with my heart,
I will stand against them.
They'll see what it's really like
to have someone put up a fight!
This isn't directed to you in particuler. It's about my debats with athist and about people who won't stand up for themselves. If someone calles me stupid then I'll tell them off. I don't care what reason they have behind it, their wrong. And if someone insults me by calling me sensative then I'll shut them up becauase they don't have any idea WHAT sensitive is. THAT is what this poem is about . . In a VERY condesed verson
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 7:27 pm
This is really great. I hate when people don't stand and fight for what they believe... So this poem is meaningful to me. Your kind of flitting between rymes and free-verse, I do it to. Was it deliberate?
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 7:49 pm
Ya i know. . I couldn't get it out without winging it a little so. . I did. and I did this within a few seconds so its not that great. .
sigh.
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 7:50 pm
Songsoftheenchantedheart Ya i know. . I couldn't get it out without winging it a little so. . I did. and I did this within a few seconds so its not that great. . sigh. No, I kinda like it.
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 4:02 am
Well thank ya. Thats very nice of you to say.
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Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 8:25 am
I like the fact that you put so much emotion into it. I often find my best (or what i think are my best) poems are written fueled by strong emotions.
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 5:34 pm
Davis Shadenhand I like the fact that you put so much emotion into it. I often find my best (or what i think are my best) poems are written fueled by strong emotions. LOLS! thanks. I'll remember to fall in love or be mad the next time I write a poem so it'll be sure to be good. XP.
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 7:01 pm
... Indeed lol i can see it now...
"Excuse me... Will you break my heart please? I want to write a poem..."
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