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Nojicakes
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 2:40 am


Want some really hard core critiques? Tired of people dancing around what you need to work on? Tired of only hearing "learn anatomy" or "omfgthatsl1ke, soeffing COOOOLL lulz" in the Picture Post?

Post your WIPs and finished artwork to be honestly but nicely critiqued.

Its the best way to learn!

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 2:23 pm


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Could you take a look at my flob. Ignore the coloring, it was just slapped on there.

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TheQualityofMercy
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 10:29 am


On the lady: Your proportions are very good, Prudent. However, the eyes are a bit too high on the face and the ear is a bit small. The lobe of your ear should line up with the bottom of your nose. Eyes are almost in the middle of your head rather than at the top of it.
You've got a very good foundation of skills on which to build upon. If we are completely excusing the colour and line work, I say just work on your facial proportioning.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 4:52 pm


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Thank you very much.

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