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Pious Flea

PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 1:20 am


Come here to talk about my story if you wish, or post up fan art and such.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 6:06 pm


Its an intriguing story, I kept on reading once I got into it.
I usually don't read too many military action stories.

Even the science fiction ones.

I'm guessing this is related to Halo. Any who's I liked it, I bet once you get into it it'll be a great action story.


Just one thing though, its kind of hard to read with the font you're using, could you bump it up one notch? Course I do the same thing using the small font and all. Never really realized how hard it is to read. Sheesh.


I really like to find out who this "regret" person is.

The Mayor of Nowhere


Aco the invader

Genius

PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 6:13 pm


What happened to Azteca? I really liked that one.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 8:49 am


I kind of got tired of it honestly...The keyboard I was writing it on broke and I lost the data so I basically said, "Screw it, I don't want to write all of it over again..."

Pious Flea



DruidofDusk


Romantic Creature

PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:23 pm


Very nice Pious, I liked it. Which is saying something since military isn't my thing. Heh...I look forward to more!

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-Cries for Uv'Grosh- Curse you Pious! Curse you...my heart breaks for the Grunt! Surely you do the devil's work, to write such sorrow!!

On a side note...I like the fourth chapter. My fav. I love Uv'Grosh, obviously.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 2:13 pm


since no one else is commenting....

Flying Monster! lol, seriously, I love it. But don't let it go to your head!


DruidofDusk


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