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 Posted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 7:27 pm
I know I've been compaining about this place being dead, but I haven't been able to create anything so far...I'm writing a novel, you see, and it's taking up my life, slowly and surely. I now know why all those manga writers complain so much 3nodding .
This one's kinda personal...I had to think about posting it, but here we go...
Why I said “No”
I felt your torso at a hair’s breath
Before I pulled away
I felt your hand caress my cheek
Before I stepped to check
I felt your chin rest upon my head
Before I spun around
I felt your hands draw me close
Before I turned away
I felt the tremors spiral up your body
Before I said enough
I saw the longing in your eyes
Before I closed my own
I felt your arms against my hips
Before mine rolled away
I felt your legs relax
Before mine turned to spring
I felt your sadness
Before I felt my fear
And all the while your passion grows
Mine fades away, replaced by shame
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Posted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 7:28 pm
Here's another one...
Face down in the mud
Fresh with congealed blood
Hands tied behind me
World stands beside me
Kicking while I’m down
Rain starts gently falling
Death starts sweetly calling
Nowhere to hide
Nowhere to reside
Trashed body on the ground
Tears start gently streaking
Liberation seeking
Fall to my knees
Deaf to my pleas
Falling without a sound
Moon shines down upon me
The white light never saw me
All hopes barred
Abandoned and scarred
Failing, lifeless-bound
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 5:14 am
Very dark and sad, I like them.
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 6:03 am
Aww...thank you, I guess! sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 7:22 am
Wynd Resrect Aww...thank you, I guess! sweatdrop I honestly mean it, I like em. But would you mind clearifing what the first one is about; I have a few different scenerios in my head, but I just want to be sure. but, if it's too personal, don't worry about it.
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 3:45 pm
Ahh...Well, I’m a good kiddo for the most part, but there was this guy one time named Tom. He was about four years older then I was, and he really wanted to be more then friends. I really liked him, but I was too straight-edged for him, even if I wasn't exactly straight edged. To him, if you didn't live for the needle, you weren’t worth his time. But we slowly became friends, and then he wanted to go further. That’s when I wrote this.
blaugh By the way, I didn't cave...Were just friends, and I'm still a virgin! blaugh
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 4:33 pm
Lol I agree with Vain, and good for you. You should give in if you don't want to mrgreen
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 6:09 pm
Well, yes, but it's always so much harder when you think you love them...but I'm not about to cave to anyone I don't want to...lol
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 6:16 pm
Sadly, Im not one.... That thing about it hard when ya think you love someone, so true.
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 7:38 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:18 pm
Anyways, again, loved them, can't wait to see what will be next.
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