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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:54 pm

Uh, so like I just finished this.
Not sure if I'm allowed to post it here but here it goes! ( Cause it's mature content. D': )
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So far I really like the ideas that are coming out for these fetish pictures. I've been looking into it (lots of research) For positions and ideas for upcoming fetish pictures I plan to make.
I may use these same two characters for that basis or others I have, we'll see what comes out.

(Bob and Duana, YOU KNOW WHO YOU BELONG TO LULZ ) surprised

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( I had to do some touchups on photoshop since it was hard to do the tiny details on my paper. ._. )

I've been bumming hard on my digital coloring so I'm gonna pause on that to work on my traditional illustration work, (and pronz sketches) which I'll update tomorrow. I'll be at The Renaissance Fair all weekend so I'll have plenty of time to make porn/fetish art, that is if I'm not too drunk with the other pirates and wenches by the fire haha. xD

Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:55 pm

If you guys got any ideas for positions or all tied up stuff let me know please please. surprised

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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 7:06 pm

This is ******** hot, but I would seriously advise against you posting it on Gaia lol
also make me bondage porn omg

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:51 am

Your drawing is good, the fabric being caught by his foot especially.

The anatomy is great aside from their heads, his seems to large, hers seems to small and they don't quite sit on the bodies well, maybe because their jaws are so strong (sticking out from their necks)

also there is a muscle between the neck and shoulder which you seem to be missing on the guy making his neck look weirdly scrawny or his shoulders weirdly round.

Also the bed rest angel is odd.

The light sourcing is good and seems both sharp and clear, especially on the different textures like the boots etc...

Errr bondage is not my thing so I can't say I like the subject matter.

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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 9:31 am

Watch the foreshortening on the guy's arms and the perspective on the bedframe/bed. The details are great, but the overall construction is a bit lacking in those areas. The sheet folds on the far edge of the bed (by the girl's leg) don't match up with the angle of the bed. The guy's arms and shoulders are also a little squished (and one arm is just really small). His head also looks big, but that may be because his features are so large (big eyes, big jawline, etc).

I'd also consider drawing some sort of backing for the bedframe or touching it up to make it look more three dimensional - right now it just looks flat. That part in particular sticks out since the rest of the piece is rendered so well.

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:28 am

Awesome, thanks guys for the critique. I'm not much of a background person and this was the first time doing a background. Unfortunatley, I didn't have a reference. I'll use one next time. I'll work on my perspective too, good points to look into.

Thanks again~ ^^

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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 12:42 pm

Awesome, but I am really noticing the shopped bits. sad

Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 4:41 pm

Each individual bit is decent but the overall piece is kind of flawed. The perspective applied to the bed (especially the headboard) and the male's arms as they interact with the headboard are really throwing me off.

You did a fantastic job shading the crinkles on that sheet, but the implied angle created by the placement of her knees doesn't seem to agree with the angle the bed wants to suggest.

The whole woman is great, but the man seems skewed from the nipples up.

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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 10:28 pm

The bed.

It's SO LIEFELD!.

Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 1:07 pm

there are some major inconsistancies within the drawing styles of the two figures. It appears also that you have the female figure down pat, however the mail form is pretty weak. I would deffinately focus on practicing the anatomy of a male torso and proportion... or at least try to master it as well as you have the female form. And don;t save the faces for last. I'm not quite sure if you did exactly that, but the female's face is extremely 2-d and inconsistant from the rest of the piece. And i agree with everyone else, perspective needs to be worked on. The male's face is very well developed. =) like the concept, very alive.

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