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Naxts

PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 10:47 am


In a black winter, A device was created that can provid an infinate ammount of power using heat with the ablity to create heat as well. A debate started, It was about what to do with it. Should we distribute one to each and every single family and this nation drops economicly? Or only allow the rich, to gain this power.


The 3rd genertation war started between a union, and the republic. Young Johnathan, who was 14 at age, marched alongside the Union, with rifle in hand, was captured and placed in a POW camp.

CHAPTER 1: First Day

In a somber prison cell like room, dark in the middle of night, with snow pouring outside.

[Johnathan wakes]

Johnathan: Ugh, man... What hit me?

[John scared, noticeing that he is no longer sleeping alongside a rock, glances around, making a quick scan of his current surroundings.]

Johnathan: (wisper) Where am I? Ugh, they must be accusing me of stealing again

[John gets up on his cold feet, streaches clamly and walks to the door and looks though the small opening on the door]

Johnathan: Hello! You can let me out now, I didn't do any-

[John quites down as he saw that the guard approching has the sword and sheild crest on his jacket. The repulblic symbol.]

[The guard approched him, pressed his face ageisnt the door's oppening and gave him a look, John instantly recongised the look and backed away as the guard left]

Johnathan: (Think) Oh. My. God. John... What have you gotten yourself into?

[John coulden't control himself, he released all his emotions, running around this small ammount of space jumping and letting out noises that he himself didn't undestand.]

[In the second of an instant, his door busted open, guard poured in with a long pole and onced they gave him a good whack, John felt a strong jolt of electrisity quickly rush thoughout his body before his eyes sucummed to darkness]
PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 10:49 am


wow, it seemed so much longer when I was typing it.

Naxts


Naxts

PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 9:31 am


This is only the first chapter. So I don't want "THATS 2 SHOAT11!!!!!11!!!11"
Chapter 2 will be added when I'm bored enough
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