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 Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 7:41 am
1000 Years.
1000 Years.
"A thousand years, a thousand more,
A thousand times a million doors to eternity
I may have lived a thousand lives, a thousand times
An endless turning stairway climbs
To a tower of souls
If it takes another thousand years, a thousand wars,
The towers rise to numberless floors in space
I could shed another million tears, a million breaths,
A million names but only one truth to face
A million roads, a million fears
A million suns, ten million years of uncertainty
I could speak a million lies, a million songs,
A million rights, a million wrongs in this balance of time
But if there was a single truth, a single light
A single thought, a singular touch of grace
Then following this single point , this single flame,
The single haunted memory of your face
I still love you"
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 7:42 am
sorry but i believe that this deserves a verbal rather than poll reply so no poll sorry
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 9:50 pm
No problem! This is the one place that poll can be nullified, I'd hate for a silly rule like that to detract from creative progress! (we should do the same for the artist's forum, really)
I liked this alot! Even though you used the same numbers over and again, you found a way to keep them useful in expressing what you wanted to express. It wasn't a gimmick, or a crutch. i liked the punchline, too. I didn't see it coming that it was a love poem. whee
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 11:34 am
Frogsnack No problem! This is the one place that poll can be nullified, I'd hate for a silly rule like that to detract from creative progress! (we should do the same for the artist's forum, really) I liked this alot! Even though you used the same numbers over and again, you found a way to keep them useful in expressing what you wanted to express. It wasn't a gimmick, or a crutch. i liked the punchline, too. I didn't see it coming that it was a love poem. whee thanks Frog I made it alittle while back but never thought to see what people thought of it........i might put up another later on tonight if i come up with another good one from my book of stuff.
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 7:12 pm
I think this one's very poetic- makes me want to draw.
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