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Sorry to say but you do need a little more practice.

I would really recommend what dreamer Spirit said, and do some observational drawings. Your feet actually make me cringe when I look at them (feet and hands are the hardest parts though, so don't feel bad), so I would really recommend practicing them. Also, I would recommend looking at the face a bit more and really really study it. Draw it like shapes, and lines, rather than as a face. Really, what I would recommend is taking like 3 months to a year of just drawing people, places, and things from observation. Draw tables, draw your hand, do self portraits. Study and study, and you'll be amazed at your progress.

she definatly needs a neck, and her breasts need more work, and the hair is too chunked together try making it more messy and wavy and the wings need a bit more work i sugest look at pictures of wings and try to practice those. and always remember practice makes perfect just keep going at eigther the same peice over and over again until its perfect or go with things that are similar. but basically try to perfect the things you already know how to do instead of having only good with everything you draw, and slowly build up from there. cool