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 Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 5:11 pm
As of yet untitled
My apologies, dearest.
Things didnt quite come out as i planned
maybe i wasnt careful enough,
or maybe i just wasnt good enough
or maybe, in all out hardest efforts and feelings
we just cant do this.
Relax, its alright, youll breathe soon enough
Will you walk with me?
I cant promise you the wondrous beauty
or the unmatched joy others will
But i can promise
in the End, everything will even its play
if youll only see it with me.
For every wrong turn i make
i cant expect you to forgive or forget
i just ask you to live with them
as maybe you would live with me in all my flaws
all those things that make me insufferable
this is a lullaby to me,
what is it to you?
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 6:31 pm
this poem is beautiful. great job
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 5:57 pm
*sniff sniff* crying Chimerax!!!!! Your poems always make me cry! *WAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!* (in a good way)
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 6:27 pm
my, my, love your poems. I probably commented twenty of them already
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 5:59 pm
It's so beautiful. Sad and beautiful. And I love it. If I wasn't cried out from seeing Phantom of the Opera, it'd probably make me cry. Keep up the good work, I want to read more of your work.
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