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 Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 10:27 am
??? i dont know what to call this one????
You have seen the cuts on my arms
and the truth in my eyes
Peeled back the layers
exposing all of the lies
kinda short but i like it
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This one i wrote a while ago and found it in my old notebook it is just well me and it is called Alone Forever...
I walk these halls
and pass you by
You dont even think to ask me why
Ignoring me
is what you do
This to me is nothing new
As i look at you
i must turn away
Never knowing What to say...
(edit i just rellized i already posted this one sry)
I have alot of others but im eather to lazy to type them or I cant find them I have like 3 notebooks full, post with critizism if needed
O and I wrote the one in sig. too
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:25 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 4:35 am
nice work.. when did you make these.. btw i like the first 1 a lot burning_eyes
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 4:50 am
you are gooooooooooooooooooooood.... biggrin
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 12:25 pm
you should continue with the first one
its just a verse, you could make it into a great poem
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 3:51 pm
hiccups is right it would turn out great
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