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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 12:32 pm


The red flows through me feeding my muscles and setting my blood aflame. My blade is covered in blood as I slaughter my foes before me. My blade breaks and I cast it aside. My hands rend flesh from bone, my vision fades into a red haze and I no longer pay heed to the screams around me.My body is fueled by rage.My skin is heated by the flames from within. I kill all before me anyway I can, I rip out throats with my own teeth. blood flows across my skin bathing me in its warmth, feeding my soul. I feel not pain, nor fatigue my muscles are fueled by the flames of anger and hate that burn all around me. I am an unstoppable juggernaut that feeds on destruction, death, and anger.I feed on war. I am taken by bloodlustand kill and kill till everyone is dead till I feed on flesh of my enemies and drink of their blood.


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PostPosted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 4:27 pm


Wow that was kinda gory but really deep. The way you wrote it made it work. I liked it a lot.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 11:34 am


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 7:19 am


I honestly don't like it, because I just don't care for violence. It's very well written, though, and the piece about being fueled by the flames of hate is done excellently.

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