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 Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 5:41 pm
Why am i the one to know
the one to think
the one to show
why am i the one to hate
the one to love
the one left to fate
why is mine the heart to tear
the one to feel
the one to care
why am i the one to shout
the one to fear
the one left out
why am i the one to cry
the one in pain
wishing to die
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 10:35 pm
Wow...This is one of the best poems I've read...I really liked it, nice rhythm, nice rhyming...And it makes complete sense.
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 10:29 am
OMG i love this poem it blowes mine totally out of the water i wish i could write like you
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 12:51 pm
im in a poetry club and we are suppost to find poems that we love and put them on this thing called The Wall and i was wondering if i could put this up, i will give you total credit i promise.
PLZ blaugh
if not than thats ok 2
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:48 pm
most def, i would be most honored
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 7:08 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:13 pm
i loved it/ didn't. i loved it because it was beautiful. i didn't like it cuz it reminded me of my life.
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