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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 12:40 am
I care not the consequenses of my reaction to the stimuli of this tragic plane of this life entombed in hateful attraction the anger my soul can no longer contain may the fires rain down and the false prophets burn turn all smiles to frowns and give the vice another turn loose the arrows of destruction send forth the harolds of rage won't you heed my instruction burn down this dark stage the world is a sespool of hatered and vice were it not for these evils the world might be nice
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 6:00 pm
Sonnets are supposed to be composed in iambic pentameter (sp?). You fail.
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:33 pm
hence the title of pseudo sonnet. i only paid attention to the traditional rhyme scheme rather than conform to confine my verse within a set beat
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