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 Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 7:54 pm
Hi.. Well, I'm sworn to chaos, but other than that...
Words. And their sweet elasticty.
Table of contents:
Are for organized people.
Welcome to saying sorry
Welcome to saying sorry;
this is me, apology
Welcome to bleeding sorry;
this is me, imagery.
Droplets, driplets, ringlets; blood
Said "I'd never hurt a hair
On my daughter's head"
This is me, clotting scared.
Sonnets, Jared's, diamonds; love
Said "I'd never leave you, lover"
Welcome to me,
leaving fool's gold for shiny silver.
Welcome to saying sorry;
this is you, apology
Welcome to saying sorry;
This is me, leaving.
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 3:26 pm
crying this make me a lil sad. i like the way it's written though.
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 11:42 pm
wow. that is awesome! I had to read it a few times to get it completely, but usually I don't have to do that unless its truly deep. I love how you had the speaker of the poem turn around at the end.
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