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 Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 4:39 pm
I am from loud dogs and messy rooms,
Mountains upon mountains of
Art mistakes and story ideas
I am from computer screens
And graphic design
To those old cars down the street
I am from trophies and ribbons,
Them dog shows I love so much
Good food and great times,
That's where I'm from
I am from country music blastin' in the car
And coming home sandy after a day at the beach
I am from bumps and bruises,
Scars and scrapes
I am from lost family members and strong hearts
To the people who're still living through the pain
I am from "put your heart into it"
To "don't give up"
I am from a family,
Cousins like siblings,
An aunt like a mom
I'm from dreams and love
In the end, I'm just (my first name) from (city), (state)
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Sorry y'all!! You can't know my real name or where I'm from.
If you do already know my name and what state I'm in, I'd rather you not tell anyone. 'Kay? ^^
Please, give comments. I got a 25/25 on this in English class.
I also had to read it out loud in front of the class, and everyone said that they liked it. I personally think it's kinda dumb, but the more I read it, the more I feel that I actually did a really good job. So, comment away, but NO HATEFUL WORDS!!! Mod of the writing forum can bust you for that. (right Kurt?)
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 4:49 pm
Muwahaha! you are a genius! even though i didn't really understand the beginning but i understood the rest, it was good.
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 4:54 pm
The beginning is about my house. Dogs barking and tons of art mistakes and story ideas hiding around my room. ^^ It isn't very clear, but that's just what I wrote. Keh keh keh...
Glad you understand the rest. Weren't we both raised nearly the same way? Our moms wanted us to know our cousins... And I guess they got that wish, eh? I love you cousin!!! *tackles*
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 7:14 pm
woot! didnt read it but i did a poem like that at skool XD
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:58 am
Ithi make Mar feel no love! Pwease read it? I detest "I Am From" poems, and I actually tried my best on this one... 'Cause I had to read it out loud to the class. Peoples said it was really good and went "awe" and stuff like that. Mar wants to know if she did good! And asking Ithi is good, 'cause Mar likes Ithi's poemy-poems. ^^ So... Pwease!?
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