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ZOMGSumi
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:16 pm


Oh yes. I have written the beginning of a story.
A story that'll probably never succeed because I'll forget about it or lose interest. But you can read it if you want. XD

Here's the link to my page: .x.

Feel free to chat about it... or flame it. XD
PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 1:14 pm


hmmmm.....the ninja....GIVES A GOOD REVIEW WITH INSANE AMOUNTS OF ENTHUSIASM!!!!

I haven't touched a book of my own free will in.....oh who cares, the point is, this is actually pretty good and I wouldn't at all mind reading it.....keep up the good work...

Iko Mitsuhara


ZOMGSumi
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 4:20 pm


sweatdrop The three comments I got said the same thing, and now I'm worried about letting everyone down. XP
PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 4:48 pm


Don't worry, I've got confidence in you, you can do it, trust me, I'm a ninja ninja .....

Iko Mitsuhara


ZOMGSumi
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 3:50 pm


Yay! n_n
I'll probably have another chapter up later today... ninja
PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 10:35 am


That's awesome, Sumi! <3
Lovely descriptions, interesting plot- I can't wait to see what happens next.
Please write more!

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ZOMGSumi
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 4:09 pm


I really want to write it! XD
But I don't have the time.
Too much work.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 5:11 pm


Aww, that sucks.
Yeah, I've been having a lot of homework. Tuesday night is really bad for me now, since I have guitar lessons there now.
But luckily I don't have homework tonight, so I have a little time =3

But yeah. Well, I'm sure you'll find time in between, like, if you have nothing to do or whatever. I write at school sometimes when it gets boring, too, lol. Makes me look like I'm taking notes XD

But I lost my old notebook, and it had all my stuff in it T.T

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ZOMGSumi
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 7:37 pm


That sucks. XP
I have a write a short story for LA right now..
It doesn't really have a point or moral. XD
Oh well.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 7:37 pm


XDDD Awesome. Aren't those the best kind? I can't write things with morals
And OMG! I found my old notebook =3 <333
It was in a bag... sweatdrop

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Darkshock
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 10:36 am


A BAG!? NO ONE WOULD EVER EXPECT THE BAG!!!


MoJo-Jojo: I must remember that the bag is essential for the plan which is essential that I have the bag so that with the spoken bag I'll be able to complete the plan which will be to DESTROY THE POWERPUFF GIRLS!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

....careful folks, it's his time of month...
PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 5:14 pm


LOL!

ZOMGSumi
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izam2
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 4:53 pm


It sucked a** (because I couldn't find it xp).
PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:04 pm


(OMG i read the first paragraph and that was an amazing description!! i would never have even though of that!!! i am writing my own story and its pretty much about darkness and depressing things throughout the first half of the book and i have been wondering how to get people hooked! that was completely inspirational! i swear i wont steal that but it is truly inspiring. now i know i will defiantly go back and finish my story (i have 3 or 4 1st chs but none of them feel right i also keep using the same words over again like black void or whirlpool of hatred and despair to show the darkness i never even thought of candle or velvety blackness) but seriously dont worry about me stealing ur idea, my storry is completly diff and i have written around 100 pgs so i am not about 2 go back and rip u off, thanks though for the ideas ur story was amazing!!)

DragonHachling


ZOMGSumi
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 11:13 am


Haha thanks. =D
I really should write another chapter. Lol.
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