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Ch1r0n

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 11:22 am


I'll post one of my oldest chars in here. I have been working on him for a few years but am still honing his powers and skills. The last thing I added to him was the forms.

Gaia Username: Ch1r0n

Character's Name: Kirin

Character's Age: ???

Character's Race: Fledgeling Death god

Character's Abilities: Kirin has four forms that he uses while he fights.

1st form: Kirin has the ability to move at inhuman speeds and reach 500 MPH in under .02 seconds, He also has the ability to pull any dead souls from a 200 foot radius to aid him in combat.

2nd form: Kirins speed raises to 1000 MPH in under .05 seconds, His scythe, which is a prison for the dead souls he has claimed as his own servants, can now summon the dead back to aid him.

3rd form: Kirin is now able to move just the barrier of light, topping off at 2500 MPH in just a second, his power as a death god now show as he is able to pull back dead souls from anywhere they happen to rest in order to fight for him, His scythe now also sends out waves of death energy as he swings it.

4th form: This is Kirin's final and most powerful form. He asscends to the godly plain and becomes a true god of death. Before he does this He targets any and all who took part in the fight, Friend and foe alike, and removes thier souls. The fourth form is used as a last resort and when he uses it he no longer exists on this plain. (I.E. I lose the ability to use him as an RP Character forever.)


Character's Personality: Kirin rarely fights other than to claim the souls of those about to die. If challenged however, Kirin will fight soully for the ability to claim the persons soul as his own servant.

Character's History sad Coming at a later date, I gotta find it.)

Character's Appearance: (Custom artwork for all four forms coming soon) 1st form, this how kirin looks everyday. Basically a big black cloak covers everything from view as he stands roghly 5' 11". 2cnd form, He removes the cloak to reveal a skeletal figure standing over 8 feet tall. Skin hangs off its bones in rotting patches and two demonically red glowing eyes shine through the sunken sockets. 3rd form, Kirin's cloak reforms but this time a deep purple cloak with gold trims all around the edges. Gold armor covers his entire body and his skull loses all human characteristics. He stands around 5 foot in this form. 4th form, not gonna go into detail with this form since its never been seen.

Comment on it if you wish but keep it civil.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 3:13 pm


Not that it isn't a cool and wll written character description, because it definitely is, but you seem to make him too powerful. Even by his first form he's godmoding. Most Rp's won't allow it.

cloud26strife

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