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 Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:04 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 9:09 pm
gotta go wit J on dat one. havent seen someone name get butchered that bad in ages. dats crazy
vote: J
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 10:53 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 10:17 pm
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 4:43 pm
VOTE bitches! ...Yeah, you, I hope you read this! xd
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 6:05 pm
I vote for Jaiden because he just basically trashed your name and I just found his verse to be more enjoyable
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 7:07 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 1:06 am
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:04 pm
sad confused neutral ...Well, this is getting nowhere...
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:34 pm
I don't know what's up with these cats. People always want others voting in their battles, but never want to vote in another's.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 1:52 am
Jaiden took this one. He had better punchlines and was more consistent with skill throughout. Ghosts punches weren't strong enough or insulting enough to win this.
Vote: Jaiden Stryker
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 4:10 am
Ghost got KOed. Good s**t Striker.
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 12:14 pm
OK, LYK seriously.
Jaiden, you and me are cool...But you really need to work on ya punches. Yes they're extremely relevent/creative...But IMO they lack good execution. No I don't mean multies or a rhyme scheme, I mean...Just to to word it better so the sentence builds up to the punch...To me it's like the whole bar is dissing the opponent, so the shock value is gone by the end. Whereas take...Me for an example, I insult with the last half of the 2nd sentence in the bar...Y'now, my PUNCHline
Just trying to give Constructive Criticism here.
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 5:12 pm
Good battle Jai. I'm still in the process of finding my style, so when I break down the door, I'll let ya know. Peace.
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 8:18 pm
jceaz OK, LYK seriously. Jaiden, you and me are cool...But you really need to work on ya punches. Yes they're extremely relevent/creative...But IMO they lack good execution. No I don't mean multies or a rhyme scheme, I mean...Just to to word it better so the sentence builds up to the punch...To me it's like the whole bar is dissing the opponent, so the shock value is gone by the end. Whereas take...Me for an example, I insult with the last half of the 2nd sentence in the bar...Y'now, my PUNCHline Just trying to give Constructive Criticism here. I see what you're saying, homie. I'll keep that in mind for my next battle.
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