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 Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 7:39 pm
ok i just daydreamed this one so...here it goes..
(Inuyasha and the gang are once again in battle with another group of demon bandits ((somewhat resembling the band of seven...only smaller)). There are three of them, each named Ronin ((the leader)), Shima, and Takai. They have terrorized towns for many months...obviously that caught inuyasha and the gang's attention. They thought that beating the trio would be simple, but once they tried to battle them...the trio showed much power. In the end, the trio escaped to discuss their new enemy:
Ronin: "This half-demon Inuyasha seems to have a problem with us...if he continues to get into the way with his friends...we must eliminate them immediately."
Inuyasha was now officially involved, and target #1. Some battles persisted afterwards...but only minor battles between one of the trio with one or two of the gang. Also, because of these minor battles, the gang was split up in two: Sango, miroku and kilala and Inuyasha, Kagome and shippo. Ronin decided to take out inuyasha himself. He was not concerned with kagome...seeing as she is just a mere mortal. He didn't even look twice at shippo.
Meanwhile: Sango, miroku and kilala are confonted by Shima and Takai. Fortunately, takai is the "baby of the trio...so it's really like one and a half to deal with. The battles between these two groups start to spark....)
Ronin: "Inuyasha...you seem to have gotten yourself into some sort of mess...pity you will have to die for it...."
Inuyasha: "I doubt you will even put a dent in me, Ronin. I have a feeling that this battle will be over with soon enough.."
Ronin: "So confident! Then again..I would expect such behavior from a mere half-demon like yourself..."
Inuyasha: "That's right...just keep talkin like you will actually beat me...at least your spirits will be up...but not for long..." *whips out tetseiga*
Kagome: "Inuyasha...be careful...he has a jewel shard..."
Inuyasha: "Dont worry Kagome. I've beaten demons with tons of jewel shards before..."
Ronin: So....the girl can sense jewel shards...well...no matter... "Prepare to die, Inuyasha..." *lunges for an attack*
Inuyasha: "Die! Ronin!" *Throws wind scar attack*
Ronin: *dodges attack* "HAH! That won't work on me this time, Inuyasha!!!" *attacks with poison claws*
Inuyasha: "Ugh!" *dodges attack*
Kagome: "Inuyasha! Be careful!"
Shippo: "Inuyasha better watch out for those...those are powerful claws...I wonder where miroku and sango are?"
Meanwhile:
Sango: "Miroku, we have to take out Takai first...once he's gone...our job will be easier..."
Miroku: "I know...I'll distract Shima for a while...take care of Takai."
Sango: "Ok..." *throws weapon at Takai* "Take this, demon!"
Takai: *gets nicked on the arm by the boomerang* "Ugh....it will take more than that to stop me, human.." *Lunges at sango* "ARRRGH!"
Miroku: "Shima..your time ends here..." *opens hand* "WINDTUNNEL!!" *hand starts sucking up everything*
Shima: "AHHH!!" *starts to move toward the windtunnel* "This will stop that annoying void of yours!!!" *takes out vial and opens it and throws it at windtunnel*
Miroku: "What is tha- AH!" *Cringes and closes windtunnel* "What is that??"
Shima: "That is my own special blend of herbs...it acts as a very strong poison to humans like you...soon you will be paralyzed and die...!"
Miroku: "No! That can't...be..." *cringes in pain...* "Ugh...it hurts..."
Sango: "No! Miroku!" *slashes at takai and rushes over to him* "Are you ok? Are you in alot of pain?"
Miroku: "no...I'm ok for now...but we need to hurry and defeat these two...go fight Takai. I'll take care of Shima for now..."
Back to Inuyasha:
Inuyasha: "It's the end of you...Ronin..." *throws another attack*
Ronin: "..no...it's not.." *dodges and attacks back* "I will defeat you...now! *Shoots poison darts from his hands*
Inuyasha: "What??" *gets shot in the chest and stomach* "Ah!...No..ugh!!" *cringes*
Kagome: "Inuyasha!!!" *grabs arrows*
Inuyasha: "Kagome...no...don't...ugh" *cringes again* "I'm ok...I just gotta be more careful..." *gets up*
Kagome: "Inuyasha...be careful!"
Inuyasha: "Don't worry..I will..." *Lunges with tetseiga*
Kagome: "Shippo...you have to find the nearest village and get herbs for poison and bring it back here...ok?"
Shippo: "Ok Kagome. You can count on me!" *runs into woods*
Kagome: Inuyasha...
Inuyasha: "Die, Ronin!" *uses wind scar*
Ronin: *tries to dodge but gets hit in the leg* "AH! DAMN YOU INUYASHA!!!!!" *Goes to attack again*
Inuyasha: "Not today, pal." *dodges Ronin and stabs him in the back* "HA!"
Ronin: "UGH! You b*****d!" *holds stomach* "Unfortunately...." *stands up straight again* "...that won't kill me...or even harm me..." *wound heals* "...and now....if you don't mind...I am gonna finish you now..."
Inuyasha: "In you dreams..." *goes to attack again*
Ronin: *laughs* "You're done!" *grows ball of demonic energy in hand and Pushes it through Inuyasha's stomach when he comes to attack*
Inuyasha: "NO!" *falls to ground* "ugh...no..."
Kagome: "INUYASHA!!!"
Ronin: "That poison won't help your recovery now...half-demon..."
Inuyasha: "You would think so..." *staggers to get up again*
Kagome: "Inuyasha!!" *runs to him* "Inuyasha! Are you ok? Shippo should be back soon with medicine..."
Inuyasha: "No...kagome...get away..." *falls down again*
Kagome: "Inuyasha!" I have to do something...I can't just sit here anymore... *grabs an arrow*
Inuyasha: "No ...kagome!"
Kagome: "Take this, Ronin!!" *shoots arrow at Ronin.*
Ronin: "hmph that mere arrow won't work on me...even though it is sacred...I will send this right back at you!" *deflects arrow back at kagome with energy ball* "Now you will learn not to interfere..."
Inuyasha: "NO!!! KAGOME!!!" *tries to get up*
Kagome: AH! *gets hit with arrow* "inuyasha..." *falls to knees* "I...can't...st..sta-" *falls backwards*
Inuyasha: "KAGOME!!!! NOO!!!! KAGOME!!!!" *staggers up and runs to kagome* "KAGOME!!!" *holds her in his arms* "Kagome? KAGOME! Say something!"
Kagome: "Inuyasha...go...f-finish him...don't worry about me..."
Inuyasha: "Kagome...your losing alot of blood...i need to get you to safety...!"
Ronin: "Forget the girl, inuyasha...fight me!!!"
Kagome: "Go inuyasha..."
Inuyasha: "Grrrrrrr....RONIN!!!! You will pay!!!" *gets up and lunges at Ronin*
Ronin: "HA! That's more like it!!" *Grows another demonic energy ball in hand...* "but sadly...it ends here.." *Throws ball at inuyasha*
Inuyasha: "I believe you are mistaken...it ends...NOW! BACKLASH WAVE!!!!" *throws backlash wave at ronin*
Ronin: What? What is this??? NOOOO!!!!! *gets torn apart*
Meanwhile:
Sango: "AHH!!" *Throws weapon and sword at same time* "Take that!!"
Takai: ARGH!!! *falls to ground* "you...you beat me...wench..." *falls down*
Shima: "TAKAI! You will pay for this!!" *attacks sango*
Sango: "Ah!" *blocks attack with boomerang* Miroku!!
Miroku: "I will use my windtunnel...that will end him...for good..."
Sango: "Miroku! No! The poison!"
Miroku: "I have to finish this..." *opens windtunnel* 'WINDTUNNEL!!!!"
Sango: "NO! MIROKU!"
Shima: "FOOL!!!!" *throws another vial at miroku*
Sango: "NO!" *Throws sword at vial* *vial shatters to ground* "Miroku! Stop before you suck it up!"
Miroku: "Ok!" *stops void*
Shima: "See? I told you that wouldn't work...I was prepared for you beforehand!"
Miroku: I need to surprise him witht he windtunnel so he can't throw more poison... "You're right...shima...you have done well..." *takes a step forward* "I am impressed..." *takes another step forward* "but...I am also smart...and clever...maybe even more that you!" *Opens windtunnel* "TAKE THAT!!"
Shima: "AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" *goes into the void*
Miroku: *Stops void* "well....glad that's over...now sango...can you drag me to get help? I can't move my legs..." *falls*
Sango: "Miroku!"
back to inuyasha:
Inuyasha: *panting* "there...now it's done..."
Kagome: "good..." *closes eyes*
Inuyasha: "Kagome!!!" *runs over to her* "Kagome! Hang in there!!" *picks her up* "I'll get you help!!" *starts running with Kagome in his arms*
(time passes)
Inuyasha: *running with kagome* "kagome...hang in there...i will help you!!"
Kagome: "Inuyasha ...stop...stop running...you're still hurt..."
Inuyasha: "Kagome! No...I have to save you! I'm all right! Everything's going to be ok..."
Kagome: "No...it's too late...there's nothing you can do...just stop NOW...i need to talk to you..."
Inuyasha: "Kagome..." *stops and lays her on ground in his lap* "Kagome we can't waste time! we have to go-"
Kagome: "Inuyasha...thank you for trying...I want you to get better...you must go find shippo and make sure he's ok...then go find miroku and sango...and..." *cringes in pain*
Inuyahsa: "NO! right now I'm going to get you help!"
Kagome: "no...it's too late...I know it...I...I..." *takes a breath* "I want you to know..."
inuyasha: "Stop! you can tell me when you're better!" *starts to tear* "I won't let this happen!! Not again!!"
Kagome: "Listen to me...this wasn't your fault. Always know that...and..." *reaches hand up to hold his face* "I don't want you to become a full demon...stay the way you are...for me..."
Inuyasha: *holds her hand to his face* "Kagome...don't die on me! Please! I need you! Don't go!"
Kagome: "I ...I really love you Inuyasha...I really do...I've always wanted you to know that...I love you..."
Inuyasha: "K-Kagome..." *tears stream down his face* "I...Love you too...I ...I always have" *strokes her forehead*
Kagome: *smiles weakly* "I'm glad I told...you..." *closes eyes* "i want to sleep now..."
Inuyasha: "NO! KAGOME!" *hugs her close* "Kagome...don't leave me alone...." *cries*
Kagome: ....
Well there it is....if you want me to continue...let me know...yes sad ending but i have more to it so comment!
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 8:16 pm
that was pretty good. y ou should continue. i wanna know what happens.
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:45 am
yes yes please continue btw this is really good 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 4:28 pm
that was good u should continue..plz i want to know whats gonna happen next!!
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 7:57 pm
ok...i will start working on the ending...(thanks for the nice comments!!)
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 8:45 pm
Inuyasha: "Kagome!! Kagome...please! Say something to me! I can't lose you! I...can't..." *cries more*
Meanwhile:
Sango: "Miroku...are you feeling any better?"
Miroku: "Not particularly...I still can't feel anything in my legs..."
Sango: "I'll try to get you to a vilalge to help you...please don't die miroku..."
Miroku: "Fear not, my dear sango...i would never leave you...that is something i would never forgive myself for..." *smiles*
Sango: "Miroku..." *smiles back* "Kilala! we have to get miroku out of here! Help me!"
Kilala: "mew" *transforms and comes to sango and miroku*
Sango: "thanks kilala" *lifts miroku onto kilala's back*
Miroku: "wow sango...you sure are a strong woman"
sango: "that's for slaying demons..."
Miroku: "I see..."
back to inuyasha:
Inuyasha: *running with Kagome in arms* "I'm not going to let this happen again...I have to stop it...and I know one person who has the power" but will he help?
Meanwhile:
Sesshomaru: "Jaken...go get some fish..."
Jaken: "yes my lord!!" *runs off*
Rin: "is there anything you would like me to do, lord sesshomaru?"
Sesshomaru: "If you want to help Jaken...be my guest..."
Rin: "Ok!" *runs off*
Sesshomaru: Things have been strangely slow around here lately...nothing concerning naraku has surfaced...I wonder why that is...?
Inuyasha: "Sesshomaru!"
Sesshomaru: "hm?" *turns around*
Inuyasha: "sesshomaru! i need your help!"
sesshomaru: "...just go away inuyasha...you should know by now that all I want is to see you dead by my hands...asking me for help is useless...what could possibly provoke you to come to me for something?"
Inuyasha: "Kagome is ...is...in trouble...I need you to use your tenseiga on her now before it's too late. PLease...just do this one thing..."
Sesshomaru: "and what will that get me? another bother to deal with...what if she decides to use another arrow on me? I'd rather not..."
Inuyasha: "sesshomaru...please...i will never ask you for something like this again..." *tears* "you...you have to help me..."
Sesshomaru: *looks at inuyasha's face* if he loses her...he may never recover...he will never put up a fight ...even though it would make my job easy...my victory would be useless to me...
Meanwhile:
Sango: "miroku we are almost there...are you ok?"
Miroku: "I still can't feel anything...but now i'm starting to feel a little dizzy...we should probably get there soon..." *closes eyes*
sango: "Miroku!!! Hang in there!!"
Back to inuyasha:
Sesshomaru: ".....fine inuyahsa...i will bring your precious human back...if it can still be done..." *whips out tenseiga* *tenseiga pulses* There they are *slashes sword at gremlins* *gremlins are gone* "There ...it's done"
Inuyasha: "Kagome?"
Kagome: *opens eyes* "In...Inuyasha?"
Inuyasha: "KAGOME!!!" *hugs her close* "I thought...I though I lost you..."
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 6:38 pm
Great Story!I loved it! 4laugh
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 2:42 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:01 pm
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