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Character Profile...critiques please

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Piyoko Minami

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 3:19 pm


Madelyn Olivia Winters

Born in a small town in NY (moves to San Francisco at age 16)
Twin little sisters- Sophia and Gwendolyn
She lives with her parents in San Francisco, CA
Age: 16
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Appearance: She has almond-shaped, deep-water-blue eyes, slightly inset in her oval, fair skinned face that is typically framed by her thick, garnet locks. She is thin (some call her bony) and about 5’6”. Not particularly strong.


Personality: Though she can be spontaneous, she is generally shy around new people. Her stubbornness is her downfall, though her compassion and sense of humor outshine it. She isn’t partial to being outward with emotions, though when she does it’s usually to an extreme. Madelyn typically favors her pessimistic nature, but can be optimistic on occasion. Being greatly hurt in the past, she finds it hard to trust anyone. Her passion is writing, photography, and music. She plays the French horn in her school band and piano for her own pleasure. She enjoys her alone time, but also loves hanging out with her close friends. She is rather inexperienced in the guy’s category, but is subconsciously looking for someone that can make her feel special. Although it may take Madelyn a while to make friends, she will do anything for them. She tends to avoid conflict, though this depends solely on her mood.

In a Man: Charm, kindness, sense of humor, looks, loyalty, respect, spontaneity
In a Friend: Kindness, sense of humor, loyalty,
Food likes: Oreo’s and peanut butter
Food Dislikes: Tomatoes



I definitely need more in the Appearance section...any comments would be greatly appreaciated smile Thanks!
PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 4:01 pm


There is a Character Development sub-forum in the guild for character profiles that you want critiqued.
This will probably be moved there once a moderator in the guild has time to move it.
^-^

Edit(seeing as I don't want to spam this thread with posts):
@Hideyyo:
The person never said that they had accidentally posted this in the wrong sub-forum, so I'm assuming they didn't know about the Character Development section and because of that I was just informing them.
If they had said that they accidentally placed this in the wrong sub-forum I wouldn't have said anything, but seeing as they hadn't I decided to let them know where this thread will most likely end up so they can find it later.

iNob

Omnipresent Streaker


hideyyo

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 5:45 pm


She accidentally posted it in the wrong subforum.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 1:49 pm


oh, sorry...i didnt know there was a subforum for this kinda thing should i move it myself? or maybe repost it?

Piyoko Minami


iNob

Omnipresent Streaker

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:06 pm


Akya the Air Goddess
oh, sorry...i didnt know there was a subforum for this kinda thing should i move it myself? or maybe repost it?
I would suggest contacting a moderator(of this guild of course) that is online at the moment (if none are just ask SDRP) to move it for you.
Mistakes happen, so no worries!
3nodding
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