yeah...i need crit on this xd so far ive gotten: give them more shape i.e., make the lines more curved and flowing, the fingers have not been drawn in, the one on the right's face and hand look...weird...by the way, i detest that word...weird. not helpful at all domokun but you have give picture post users their credit^_^
Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 9:09 pm
The one on our left has way too much chin - the middle of the mouth should be roughly halfway between the bottom of the nose and the chin.
Also, for these particular characters I'd give their waists more ) . (
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 5:42 am
Consider how the mouth wraps around the face. Doing that correctly is harder than most people give credit for, but it would really help your picture here. Also consider not outlining the lips fully.
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