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Sephrena. (critique please)

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Kristi Anaphelisa

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 6:36 pm


Name: Sephrena Davine
Age: 15
Origin: Magistra (human+vampiress+unborn beast)
Gender: Female
Eyes: Lavender
Hair: Blood red
Birthdate: 5/30
History: She was not born; she was created by the Fire Lord, Frost, who had killed the one person she felt closest to: Anita Onyxx. She as created as Frost's daughter, but she retaliated. She, in the end, killed Frost, and set off on her own, to find what she has been looking for; herself. She became a songstress at the age of 14, and performs when she gets the chance. She is a writer, and is shunned by society, she is now an "undefined", as she calls herself. She is the Magistra Princess, and every Princess needs a Prince, and that person, is her only friend, Jack. Unknowning of this, Sephrena runs away from the one place she could call home, and sets off to find herself, and this Prince.



That's all I have.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 7:31 pm


Mmm, it seems a bit cliche, eespecially the dramatic family deaths.

But she could be pretty good, keep working. xD There's not much there for me to critique, so yeah.

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