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Fiend The Bunny

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 5:34 pm


My Current Main, he goes along aside my partner in crimes character, whom is a Holy Paladin, and will cited in the Bio often. Which is currently working. This is my rp friendly profile, while most of my profiles are created for Arena type combat, such as the Legendary BA. Note, he is unrefined, and grammatical mistakes are without doubt in there.


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Username:dragonfighter
Name:Dieb-Kämpfer-Abzahlung
Race:Human
Class:Reformed Bandit/Paladin in Training.
Height:5'11
Weight:190 lbs ((Muscle))
Weapons:
Rune Blade: The powerful red glowing Rune Blade of Arcane. It is sheathed on his back, under the cloak, a hole in the cloak allowing the Zweihander style hilt to poke out, it is held down by straps, that make it stand perfectly straight on his back. The Rune Blades' magic is impressive in nature. Each swing releases a wave of what he calls "Blood Energy" it is in fact Crimson Arcane Energy. It is highly crossover, and even higher explosive. Depending on the user, he can switch between the two natures. In Crossover state, if struck with it, it will melt the area struck. In explosive state, on contact, it will explode on a Hand Grenade level. If your cut directly by the blade, it will pour a powerful poison into your blood stream, which will paralyze the strong, and kill the weak within moments.

Gladius: The Roman Short Sword, this straight, stabbing style blade is made to get through chain mail, and plate mail. Its slashing edge remains sharp, and is double edged like most blades of the time. It may not be a cutting blade, but it can do it. It is a very simple blade, and is used only when needed, or when he doesn't feel like wasting his enchanted blade.

Armor:
Leather Armor: Simple leather armor, it is dark tan in color. It protects against slashing style strikes, and has minor defense again stabbing attacks. It has no defense against arrows, and is extremely light weight, allowing him to dodge at full speed with very little restraint. It does its job nicely, both protecting, without restricting like plate armor.

Cloak of the Arcane: This cloak, much like his Rune Blade, is enchanted. It is completely element immune, meaning, if he covers his entire body with it, not element magic of any kind can harm him, at all. It is also normal weapon immune. meaning if slash at his back, or if he covers himself with it, no non-enchanted, or non-magical weapon can cut or damage it. Making it much like powerful plate armor, yet still like cloth.
Powers:
Minor Arcane: Dieb is a minor wielder of the Arcane. He enchanted his own weapon, and cloak. His favorite are what he calls Arcane Spikes, thin, icicle shaped spikes fire from his finger tips. When they strike the target the explode at a level of hand grenade each. Powerful, but costly, all his Arcane magic hurts him vastly in return.
Personal Effects:
Cloak: The cloak he wears, despite being Enchanted by him, was given to him by his wife. Who is still alive, and lives with him, and his one son. Dieb loves his family, and his Wife being everything to him. He met her shortly after being converted by Heilig, a Holy Paladin who spared his life in combat, and thus he devoted himself to whatever Heilig desired. Which was Dieg's repentance. This cloak is similar to a modern day Wedding Ring, in the fact it was given to him on Dieb's wedding by his wife.
Personality:Rough and without modesty, Dieb is still a Bandit at heart. And it shows in his nature to act like one. He curses, he rarely shows respect to anyone but Heilig and his wife, and openly bad mouths what he dislikes. He picks fights when its not necessary, and just all around acts like a thug. Heilig is slowly changing his ways, but to change ones core is difficult, and it will take some time to make this Bandit, into a Paladin.

His nature on the battlefield is, strike to kill, never prolong the fight. For that is how a Bandit works, fight dirty if necessary. He is known to kick dirt into the opponents face, and then cut them down. All things a Paladin would consider dishonorable, and useless. He is also gung ho to jump into any war, regardless of its means or aim. Therefore also making him against the Paladin way..But he is changing, and he is being guided.
Scars/Tattoos/Markings:
N/A
Personal Beliefs/Religion:
Dieb's beliefs are confused currently, originally worshiping the Pagen Gods of the Sun, ETC. He recently has found God, and is slowly learning the ways of the Paladin. Therefore, his old ways, and his new ways are conflicting, making much of his decisions hard.
Bio:((Working.))
PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 1:34 pm


Kawii!! wow thats some information there.... its really cool and all the armor and weapons totally awesome. the way you put it almost makes it sound like hes luke or dark vader form starwars blaugh but thats just me but its very interesting 4laugh i cant wait to hear more of your character hopefully! may we be friends!?  

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:11 pm


I like it. The bio should be interesting considering his personality and information about his personal effects.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:21 am


His weapons seem to be exceptionally powerful. Almost god-like. Though, you've given him room to grow emotionally. He can't really grow any... powerwise. What you can do -is give him a limited amount of time to use these very powerful items. It also gives reason to why his nature on the battlefield is strike to kill.

Aside from that. I thought it was very, wonderfully descriptive and beautifully woven together. Lovely picture.

Onamisaki

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