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xrandombananax

PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:54 am


The Rain

Rain drops like blood they fall
Trickling down the window
Invisible to the naive
Broken eyes shatter and watch
The world darkens
As rain drops fall
Splashing like a thousand knifes
In pools of envy
A hundred dreams smashed into glittering pieces
Forget the sun
Forget the joy
Dampened our souls lie
As we slowly die
Soaked in our pain
Soaked in the rain
PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:01 am


Interesting. I like it, since it gets into what the other side of rain can mean.

Angel Bruja


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Dapper Fatcat

PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:20 am


I enjoyed it.

I very much like it.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 6:46 am


xrandombananax
The Rain

Rain drops like blood they fall
Trickling down the window
Invisible to the naive
Broken eyes shatter and watch
The world darkens
As rain drops fall
Splashing like a thousand knifes
In pools of envy
A hundred dreams smashed into glittering pieces
Forget the sun
Forget the joy
Dampened our souls lie
As we slowly die
Soaked in our pain
Soaked in the rain


I quite like it but my mum thiks it's too depressing....well....her exact words were "OMG THAT'S SO HORRIBLE!!!" But no offense. She has no experience with poetic depression so she has no idea what she's saying. rolleyes

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Shinigami-Rem_Death-Note

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 6:40 am


xrandombananax
The Rain

Rain drops like blood they fall
Trickling down the window
Invisible to the naive
Broken eyes shatter and watch
The world darkens
As rain drops fall
Splashing like a thousand knifes
In pools of envy
A hundred dreams smashed into glittering pieces
Forget the sun
Forget the joy
Dampened our souls lie
As we slowly die
Soaked in our pain
Soaked in the rain

It's so..... BEAUTIFUL *sniff* crying lol just kidding. but it is very very good and now thanks to u every time it rains outside all i have to do to get an artistic inspiration for a sorrowful poem is look out the window! thankyou so much!!!
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 8:40 pm


WOW...

Aislin Paine

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