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 Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:50 pm
Name:Hitoshi Charmanger
Age:looks 16 is actually 160
Family:Mother-died giving birth to him
Father-a fox demon who gave hitoshi his 9 tails that appear during his 9 stages of transformation
Grandfather-a demon overlord
(no other family is known)
Abilities:while crossing the Chi line his body grows tails in 9 stages these stages are known as the 9 stages of transformation, he can also conjure fire balls as his father was the fox flame spirit
Likes: unknown
Dislikes: his demon half
Appearance:look at my avi ill draw a picture later ^^'
height:5"8 1/2
weight:173 lbs
allignment:Indifferent
(this is what i got so far tell me what you think.)
P.S.- i am now working on the appearance picture ^^'
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 1:00 pm
obviously a naruto character spin-off nothing original
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:50 am
Yeah, It does sound a little too much like a mixed-up Naruto character.
For the family portion, you could sum it all up in one sentenceinstead of giving every family member a little protion to his/herself. for the age part, you could write: Age: 160 (looks 16). It's actually pretty good, just try to come up with an original storyline. Sure, someone else may have that exact same one, but that chances of you meeting that person is one in a million on Gaia.
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