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 Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:20 am
Ok, for the time being I will only post one a day, unless someone can convince me to do otherwise. Most of it is fairly depressing, written during my "dark period" rolleyes . I don't think much of it, but y'all might like it.
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:22 am
What is this emptiness?
this insistant wanting.
the sickness has come and gone and all I feel is hollow
anger? no.
sadness? no.
happiness? no.
nothing, a complete emptiness
a void so large it seems to fill me
the emptiness stretching inside me
the void filling parts of me that once contained my personality
a seeping black in my mind
a black hole where once stood my soul
an all consuming darkness
silence
stillness
emptiness
a pinprick of light
a glimmer of hope.
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 6:09 pm
it is dark but also pure and well writen i just hope you dont feel thatway anymore 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:49 pm
Nope, I am a much happier person! Optimism is the best! xd
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:09 am
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 10:14 am
sigh. story of my life....
>__<
depression blows chunks.
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 8:00 pm
I really heart it. It was really meaningful.
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:46 pm
Yeah it is awesome >.< I wish i can write poems that doesn't rhyme. >.>
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