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Xeter-Fuchsin

PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 10:33 pm


^.^ Comments welcome from anyone who's not going to tell me flat out 'You're Wrong;' that's not helping to me. And if you are interested in starting an Rp with me because you thought that my characters are nifty or interesting in any way, then send me a message and we'll start one up~! Have a good time everyone.

Warning: Religious figures twisted to my will to become my own characters. You are Warned.


Character Name: Belial; Angel of Earth

Character’s nic Names: Whatever you can think of that you’d like to call him, though he may disagree

Sexuality: Whatever he feels like at the time

Age: Endless

Race: Angel that has “fallen from grace”; One of the Four Crowned Creators of Hell

Eye Color:
Lava red and orange eyes with a black ring around them.

Hair Color: The deepest shade of red and black mixed without going pure black. Neatly trimmed short, but enough hair to style.

Voice: Smooth and silky; some would think that when he speaks to them, he’s coming on to them when it’s really him and his regular sounding sexy voice.

Personality:

Positive Traits: Smart; Refined; Respectful to those worthy of respect; Indulger or tries many things without first judgment; true Independence; self-sufficient, and personally accomplished; Lover of all things beautiful; Loyal to those beautiful things and unwavering loyalty to himself; Absolutely GREAT in bed (Lol); Fun; Humorous; Can laugh at himself; Loves a challenge; Willing;

Negative Traits: Perfectionist; Prideful; Berserker when ticked; Vengeful; Selfish; Arrogant; Huge Ego; Jealous; Over-territorial; A b***h; Rude aka does what he wants when he wants no matter what; Harsh judgment upon those who mess with him; Seeks to bring about chaos/confusion and blasphemy since it brings out the pure untainted/untouched sense of one’s self;

Likes: Obviously “beautiful” things; Chaos; flying through the clouds on his still pearly white wings; indulgence instead of abstinence; contradict himself in front of others; Well made silk clothing; Sex; Wine; Rock, metal and techno music; His sunglasses since they darken when more light is present and lighten when light is not present; Very, very fast things; Rubies; Roses; Talking circles around others and confusing them; Creating chaos that would usually only be present on a TV sitcom; Dance; Travel; Piss off people that he doesn’t know for no reason at all;

Doesn’t Like: Being confused; being rejected; being out-witted; children; major egos; hollow people(people who make threats they will never follow through with, etc); Reading boring text; Boredom; being corrected; Fake people; Morals; Cowardice; Drama Queens; Being a slave; Slow music;

Beliefs: Responsibility to the responsible; Death to the weak and respect for the strong; Complaining makes you a waste of space; Never waste anything, thoughts, time, effort, etc; Contradiction is the most beautiful thing in the world; True beauty is like finding a needle in a hay stack; Turning the cheek when someone has scorn you is the way of the coward;

Strives to: To claim everything that is beautiful; To live a life of true happiness; To be the perfect contradiction;

Belial is a very complex character, for he himself is one big contradiction. He follows his passion, his wishes and his desires, even if they go against what he believes. He will not penalize himself for going against his believes, but still will he preach them to those willing and worthy to listen. He says one thing and does another in other words.

Among many, he takes pride in how he presents himself to others and what ‘vibe’ he gives off to everyone. Being a living contradiction, he is also a living liar and master twister of what is. To gain what he wishes he will stop at nothing and will do anything that does not inconvenience him, for inconveniences for him are a waste.

When Belial finds something to be utterly breathtaking and train wrecking to the core, he will strive and give anything to be the captor of it, whether is be living or not living. Captivated, he will stop at nothing to keep the beautiful thing that he has spotted beautiful.

Belial’s weakness lies in his own contradiction character. When he finds a precious beautiful thing, he will sooner or later, unconsciously become a slave to it, for it will be his drug.

Physical Appearance: Almost always, Belial will be dressed in something that compliments his figure, which he has over the years made perfect in his eyes. The most precious thing to him is his image, and how he presents himself to others, for if he is alluring to all then he attracts all to be his. Over the years he has created a lean tanned body, silky smooth skin (as smooth as his voice.) Along his back though, there is no skin covering his spine, pure white bone shows as skin grows and is barely attached to his bone.

Weapons: His voice, his words and the seductive air around him.

Powers: Having dominion over the carnal and base urges of mankind, he is able to draw out the pure, raw and utterly beautiful parts of the soul that are otherwise covered by moral and one’s conscious. His voice will rack through one’s entire being, through the soul, through the mind, through the heart, the through one’s core and be able to convince that one anything that he desires them to believe. His word is law.

Being an Angel of Earth, he did have the opportunity to learn how to handle the element, but he did not pursue it as a power. The most he can do is see the history of a mineral or plant through it’s spirit’s eyes.

Background Info: Belial, being the angel created just after Lucifer, with his arrogance and pride indulged himself in the sweet liquor, original sin. Openly he displayed his blasphemy with truth and purity without fear of being cast out of heaven to the infidelic earth realm. Instead, Belial openly challenged the laws that the Creator had set for all angels and beings, finding true happiness in this.

This did not last for long though, for all his rule breaking and sacrilege he was the first angel to be cast out of the paradise, stripped of his immortality, and exiled to live in his sin on the desolate earth. Many followed him, believing that he was not at fault since he was completely honest from the start. Those who did follow him included Lucifer, Satan, Lilith and many other angels that were given the names ‘Fallen Angels’, ‘Demons’ and ‘Devils.’

Stripped of his immortality, the first thing Belial did while on Earth was visit the garden of Eden, taking the fruit of the Tree of Life, gaining back his never ending life along with a power that he already had going for him just enhanced. Seductiveness now stronger than ever flowed about him and he used it to his full advantage. Just as he was about to leave the Garden, he was discovered by Eve. Seeing as she was something precious to the one that had scorn him, he easily convinced her to bite upon the red orb created by the Tree of Knowledge with his newly seductive voice. He then sent her on her way to go and corrupt Adam.

As quickly as he made his way in to the garden, he made his way out but he was not quick enough. The hand of god reached out and cursed him and his followers to be forever defined as those who dared defied the creator; their blood turned to black.

Belial adapted quickly to being the “darkness” and “scum of the earth”, accepting his fate with open arms. He thus brought it upon himself to truly live, and bring those who wished to truly live as well to his side, one way or the other.



Character Name: Lucifer; Arch Angel Lucifer of the Light and Air

Character Nic Names: Whatever you wish, I’m fond of ‘Lucy’ or ‘Lucky’ myself;

Sexuality: Accepting and liking of both

Age: Endless

Race: Fallen Arch Angel of Wind

Eye Color: Utterly white, the pupil a very light grey but not silver.

Hair Color: Spiky in the back, short; and longer in the front with bangs of course; Black hair.

Voice: Bland, very calm that it seems to sometimes lack emotion.

Personality:

Positive Traits: Bold; Curious; accepting of really anything even if he does not like it; Hopeful; Intelligent; Stands by what he believes; Down to Earth; Analyzing; Nice compliments to those he likes; Silent; Helpful when it does not impair him; Wise; Loyal; Compassionate; Fully completes a job; Cute when flustered or surprised;

Negative Traits: Stubborn as an Ox/Bullheaded; Pitiless; Jealous; Some-what of a brat; Tempt-able; Rash at times (only when he is out of his element or very, very angry); somewhat picky; Heavy smoker; Hates mistakes; cannot laugh at himself; Often quite cold to all; Rude; Quite Selfish;

Likes: Silence and peacefulness; smart people to hold a conversation with; SMOKING; Being right; Pure actions; The truth; Talking; Writing; Reading mind twister books(likes the same with movies); Learning; Calming music; Cracking security systems; Puzzles of all kinds; tasteful comedy; SOME wines(picky); To be surprised with things that he likes;

Dislikes: His hair not obeying him; Stereotypical people; Racism; getting anything wrong; People who think they know everything about everything; Smartasses; Cockiness; Being Lied to; Pointless destructions and aggressiveness; No-beat-thrashing music; Stupidity; Repetitiveness; Betrayal; Drunks and most alcohol; Shallowness; anything that has a stupid essence

Believes: Loyalty to one’s self before all others; Stupidity is a sin; Trust is as precious as one’s time;

Strives: Enlighten all those who will listen; Live among those who accept him

Lucifer is an interesting being indeed. He’s a very loyal character, and he acknowledges that he blindly trusted in a creator that was not willing to love him for who he was or who he became no matter what. He was hurt deeply by this betrayal, and it is a wonder that he ever trusted again, but even he knew that one bad experience should not shelter you from the good ones that you will eventually enjoy. Lucifer, having the natural ability to know how to survive (ie common sense), did what he had to for survival.

When threatened, Lucifer will defend himself of course, but he will also try to reason and avoid any useless quarrels with anyone. He doesn’t like useless violence, but if it is unavoidable he will face it head on and completely tear it apart fiber by fiber.

His weakness lies in trusting those, even if he doesn’t know them at all, right off the bat. He gives many a small piece of loyalty, and through their actions he judges them carefully to see if they are capable of betrayal in any form. He takes it upon himself to show the flaws in God, and to show what true acceptance is.

Physical Appearance: Ever since Lucifer followed Belial out of the heavens where he was cursed by those who once showed compassion for him, he wears a pure white upside-down cross necklace around his neck that he made out of marble himself, to mock the shallowness of the ‘pure.’ Utterly pale white skin paired with light sandy eyes contrasts the pitchest of black hair. Like his faithful companion, the skin covering his spine has been removed, showing the pearly white bone beneath.

Weapons: His lips, for if he wishes, he can steal the breath from your soul upon a kiss to your lips.

Powers: “Stealing one’s breath” could be the very air in one’s lungs or it could also be the very essence of your core; draining you of everything, hopes, desires, dislikes, etc until that one is nothing but a veggie. Not all devils suck blood.

Background Info: Lucifer, being one of the arch angels, was looked upon highly by all. Since he was in God’s good graces, he was “respected” and “loved” by all, but hated by just as many for being able to go so close to God himself. He did not pay close attention to those around him, nor did he care much for them which made him seem rude and uncaring. Far from it, he paid every ounce of attention to God, following without question, praising without a first thought; he was completely and utterly devoted to his Lord and Master. When Belial, the angel that was created just after his own creation, had earned the title of ‘Angel of Confusion and Lust’ among the others in heaven he became aware of this interesting character that seemed as happy as he thought himself to be, even more so.

Intrigued, he chose to place his company upon the trouble making angel, inquiring and soon becoming captivated by this individual’s free spirit. Belial explained to him all that he thought and lived by. Finding no mistake or wrong doing in his life philosophy, or rather when he found something wrong he voiced up his own opinion to correct the mischievous angel but every attempt was crushed, he soon found himself liking how Belial lived his life in paradise. Sooner than later, Belial was the first to be cast out of heaven for spreading blasphemy. Immediately, Lucifer went to the Creator itself and questioned him, only to be thrown out just as harshly as Belial. At first he was unable to comprehend why he was thrown out, wallowing in misery of not being in God’s good graces, until he was found and comforted by Belial and the other angels that were thrown from the paradise. Here the first “pack of wolves” were created; loyalties to each other and confidence to their leaders.

A small portion of this pack, lead by Belial himself infiltrated the garden, but they were quickly split up by its defenses, leaving each one to fend for themselves. Lucifer found himself a sleeping Adam, where in jealousy he left the mark of his soul upon the fleshy being. He had never seen nor thought about this mark, but it flowed out of him without flaw when he carved it on the sleeping man’s back.

When Adam stirred, Lucifer panicked and ran, running into Belial who had just convinced Eve to eat from the Tree of Knowledge. After the woman ran off, hypnotized by the smooth talking angel Belial, he too ate from the Tree of Life, thus unable to be claimed by death. Upon fleeing the Garden, Lucifer and Belial once again lost each other in the run from God and his wrath.

After the curse was placed on him and the others, Lucifer made his way back to the group of fallen angels. In the same night, he announced that he needed to learn how to now survive in this new world and left the group. Living in the darkness for years to come, he finally found someone that would listen to his story and enjoy his company with penalizing him for who he was. The human’s name was Caine, and it was the seal that was carved onto the boy’s father that tied them together. Through Adam, Lucifer watched over the boy because he felt a strange connection to the child that he had not felt for a long time.

When Cain defied god and killed his brother, Lucifer swept in and saved the boy, quickly substituting him with one of the fallen angels to take the curse. Lucifer fed the Tree of Life’s last fruit piece, that he had kept secret all along, to Cain, and adopted the boy as his own.

For the next few years they both disappeared off the ends of the earth, it was thought that they were killed by God’s angels, or by God itself. This was proven wrong when Lucifer returned, but without Cain though, and started to preach true acceptance. When he was asked it he was a man of God, he neither denied nor confirmed that he was. In essence, he was, still an angel and somewhat loyal to the creator. Due to his experience though, he knew better.



Only these guys for now, more to come later.  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 2:57 am


“Age: Endless” Endless isn’t necessarily a span of time. Perhaps “Close to the beginning of time” would work or even “A millennia or two.”
“Race: […] One of the Four Crowned Creators of Hell” That last part is more like a title than a race.
“Eye Color: Lava red and orange eyes with a black ring around them.” Be more precise. What is lava red? Lava has several hues of red. But I think I understand. Lava is just a heavy word besides the fact that it’s firey, it’s got that “rocky” feeling as well since it is liquefied earth. “a black ring” around them sounds like there’s one single ring around both your eyes. I think you were trying to say each one has bordered with a black ring.
“Hair Color: The deepest shade of red and black mixed without going pure black. Neatly trimmed short, but enough hair to style.” So what’s the color of the hair reddish black? What is the deepest shade of red? Deep shade of red would work as much as deepest shade of red. That’s a lot of words for saying that it’s reddish black or somewhere along the lines of very dark red. The hair length is vague as well and the hair in general is vague, it doesn’t say how it looks like. It’s short, but apparently long enough to “style”. What is to “style” hair? Style is a loaded word as well.
“Voice: Smooth and silky; some would think that when he speaks to them, he’s coming on to them when it’s really him and his regular sounding sexy voice.” That whole sentence could be summed up into one word. Seductive. Then write about how seductive it is rather than using smooth, silky and sexy. How is it sexy? A sexy voice can be different to different people. How is it smooth and silky? Give examples of it.

The rest of his “traits” seem to be just a list and some of it is conflicting, and loaded. By loaded, I’m trying to say that some of those words can mean so different things and may require explanation.
For example the second trait in Positive trait is Refined, yet, he’s has so much negative traits and one of them is being “A b***h.” Are those really what a refined person would be? What is refined to you?
Blasphemy isn’t a verb/trait.
“Harsh judgment upon those who mess with him” This line is odd. It sounds high and almighty until the end. “mess with him” doesn’t bring that regal judgment upon feeling. How about “Hellish wrath for those who cross him”?
And what is beauty to him? You say he likes beautiful things, but beautiful is loaded.
Since he likes chaos why does he have a list of people that he doesn’t like who would probably cause chaos. For example a “drama queen” in itself is going to cause a lot of drama and chaos.
In the Strives To section, can you give us an example of what is a perfect contradiction? I would think it’s an oxymoron since contradiction in itself is not perfect.

The character is a little odd. He wants to be a contradiction yet he’s all about sex?
It kind of feels like the character is so multifaceted that he doesn’t really have much of a persona. There’s black, white and grey; characters usually are grey but tend to lean to being a little bit more black and a little more white. Belial is blue.

At least from a quick scan of Lucifer, you can get what he’s about.

Euphoric Ghost

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