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Name: Chris
Age: 13
Appearance:
Powers: Telepathy, telekenisis, psi energy generation.
Other: He's a bit serious, and often sees the dark side of things. He was nabbed off the street while walking home from school. He can only remember waking up in the compound. He allways hides behind his mask, never letting anyone close.


Name: Sabrina
Age: 13
Appearance:(The black clothes are supposed to be red.)
Powers: Can change the size of any part of her body.
Other: She's goofy and funloving, looking at the silverling rather than the cloud. She has a bit of a crush on Chris since he's so mysterious. She wants despirately for him to let go and relax.

Any suggestions on how to improve them would be appreciated.

Like the previous comment on these two, a little more in depth character analysis would be helpful; like what compound? Has Chris always had a mask to wear, even before he was nabbed? Has Sabrina always worn such revealing outfits? It seems like a good start to really good characters, and I'm guessing that you have a lot of it cooped up in your head and that you're still kind of figuring out the story line and setting yourself. Honestly I'm very curious to see more depth to both of these characters. If you could, pm when you add more fun adjectives and more to their bios, pretty please with sugar on top? <3

Thanks for the tips. 1. Yes, Chris wore a mask, a hockey mask to be precise. 2. Yea, she usually wears that sort of thing on the weekends. 3. It's a military compound created to house the succesful expiraments the millitary is doing to make the perfect soldier.
Any other questions I can answer?

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