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60% |
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 Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 12:57 pm
Kay (:
(Starts evil planning with Arreku)
>.>
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 1:03 pm
Alright!
*starts planning in head*
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 1:49 pm
Just so you know I wasn't flying, I'm using Altaria like a Chocobo. ><
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 1:54 pm
And Memo gets a loser tattoo on his forehead -_-''
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 1:59 pm
Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:13 pm
>.< Well, it'd be kinda hard to fly inside, soooo...
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:14 pm
This is double-Pokemon appeal, correct?
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:16 pm
Yep (:
OMG Arreku I just had to try and match your post LOL xD
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:20 pm
@Christian: Yes, it is. But we're not changing pokemon in between like in the anime.
@Mems: I noticed. ^^
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:21 pm
Hehe...I imagine Memo's and Arreku's faces all epic like in an anime where Coordinators are battling (:
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:24 pm
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:51 pm
Hmm... It's lacking... Don't get me wrong, it's good! I can see it happening a couple of different ways. Next time, don't be afraid to use more than one attack per pokemon. It'll always enhance the appeal. Try to keep the mood even throughout the appeal as well unless you're going for a bipolar one. ><
Try emphasizing your pokemon instead of their attacks. Use a little more glamor and try adding seals next time. It'll improve your performance by a lot.
And trust me, after you're finished writing it, you'll go "...Oh wow... I wrote that?"
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:54 pm
I agree with Arreku. Although I do see this as a great start to make something that'll knock our socks off next time (:
Just have fun with it and remember...your pokemon is the show and you have to do your best to make them shine.
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 3:02 pm
Thank you! I'll definitely put these comments into account if I ever decide to do the Coordinator class.
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 3:16 pm
I'm so sorry everyone. I must go.
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